firefly - 2008-4-7 1:24:00
Written In Days With Wound On My Right Finger
One
In other words
Scissors need tossing aside.
Toward the west slope, to meet the sunrise.
Home, remember to reversely screw the key and toothpaste lid.
Learn from a rat to gnaw anything when ripping the packet,
If this is enough to argue------
It’s far from enough
To stroke the world with eyes.
Two
My left hand’s trembling, but how I hurry to declare to Vinci,
I would successfully
Draw two imperfect circle similarly.
To see flaw of this world, a pair of leaves is enough
Three
Three of the ten fingers,
They slightly crook, may pick up a tempting cherry.
Or lessen one of them, may
Withdraw a thorn pricked in flesh
Now they droop with wound. Like a painful poet
Who undertakes overmuch crime and punishment. Division of labor for ten fingers
Approximates the fingerprint on counterfeit money, which is awfully doubtful.
Four
A micro-groove record, it revolutes slowly
What does it divulge: daylight, wheel of life, or recessive track?
If I have enough sight
I wish I could see:
An empty cuff in the wind, which with a vanished hand
Is trying to push away the fragrance of flower, music, and air.
写在右手指有伤的日子
1
就是说
剪刀要扔到一边去。
朝西坡，去迎接太阳升起。
回家，记得往反方向拧钥匙和牙膏盖。
撕包装袋的时候学学老鼠，什么都动嘴咬。
如果这还不足以证明------
对世界的抚摩
用眼睛是远远不够的。
2
左手在颤抖，但我多么急于向达芬奇宣布，
我就要成功地
画出两个同样不完美的圆。
要看出这个世界的破绽，一对树叶就可以。
3
十个指头中的三个,
它们微曲,可以拈起一粒樱桃。
或者再减一个,可以
拔出一根嵌进肉里的刺
现在它们带着伤, 耷拉着。像苦难的诗人
承担了过多的罪罚。让十指的分工
近似于伪币上的水纹，很值得怀疑。
4
一张密纹唱片，它缓慢的旋转
还泄露了什么：天光、轮回或逆行的车辙？
如果我有足够的视力
但愿我能看见：
风中的一只空袖筒，正努力用一只
消失的手，推开花香，乐音和空气。
firefly - 2008-4-7 22:50:00
问好大家
希望大家坦然指正
小弟的点滴进步都离不开你们的扶持
童天鉴日 - 2008-4-16 13:58:00
对世界的抚摩
用眼睛是远远不够的。
---------------------------------应该不仅仅是“抚摩”，还有“感知”的意思
It's far from enough
To stroke the world with eyes.
-------------------------------------------maybe "apperceive" is much better than "stroke",I see.or maybe I make a mistake.
firefly - 2008-4-17 22:47:00
原帖由 童天鉴日 于 2008-4-16 13:58:00 发表
对世界的抚摩
用眼睛是远远不够的。
---------------------------------应该不仅仅是“抚摩”，还有“感知”的意思
It's far from enough
To stroke the world with eyes.
-------------------------------------------maybe "apperceive&q
谢谢童天的建议
我回去考虑考虑