张马沙 - 2008-5-13 0:34:00
The grass is flourishing, forest dense, and fountain luxuriant
Sheltered the weak cat and fostered it to become a mighty tiger
If without the firewood provided by the low multitude
How could the sparkle have become prairie fire?
Slender cogon grass-roots can consolidate a dam
Tender water drops are able to penetrate a hard slate
Jiang Jie-shi didn’t understand how to attract common people
So he was defeated by Mao Ze-dong who was once well-known as the bandits’ head
附中文原作（注：中、英文版本皆为鄙人原创作品）
游井冈有感
2007年五一长假，与花都九三社友同游圣地井冈山。
草茂林密甘泉滋
蔽养猫狸成虎师
若无百姓拾薪柴
哪得星火燎原时？
茅根细细能固堤
水滴柔柔可穿石
介石不谙亲黎民
输给“匪”首毛润之
卧龙先生 - 2008-5-13 12:02:00
先来问好先生
晚上 过来认真看
firefly - 2008-5-13 13:19:00
The grass is flourishing, forest dense, and fountain luxuriant
Sheltered the weak cat and fostered it to become a mighty tiger
If without the firewood provided by the low multitude if 可以去掉吧
How could the sparkle have become prairie fire? become --》start
Slender cogon grass-roots can consolidate a dam
Water drops are able to penetrate a hard slate 柔柔未译
Jiang Jie-shi didn’t understand how to attract common people 非正式有用kiss people的 attract比get close to精悍
So he was defeated by Mao Ze-dong who was once well-known as the bandits’ head ----he was 可以去掉 有用ringleader evil/ boss /bandit chief的
附中文原作（注：中、英文版本皆为鄙人原创作品）
游井冈有感
2007年五一长假，与花都九三社友同游圣地井冈山。
草茂林密甘泉滋
蔽养猫狸成虎师
若无百姓拾薪柴
哪得星火燎原时？
茅根细细能固堤
水滴柔柔可穿石
介石不谙亲黎民
输给“匪”首毛润之
张马沙 - 2008-5-13 22:22:00
多谢评点。增译了“柔柔”；if与后面的how could配合，虚拟语气更明显；星火后来已经燎原，所以用have become比较好……
kiss people 虽更简洁，但不符合国情风俗；匪首还是用bandits' head较好。