中诗网,中国诗歌网|中国诗歌学会 On Earthquake (No. FF016)

firefly - 2008-6-20 22:03:00

The earthquake, having happened in Sichuan, was a great event in China this year. More than 60 thousand people died and numerous common people hurt. The losses brought by the earthquake was immeasurable at all. However, thousands of kind people, from the famous to the unknown, noble to humble, showed great concern about everything that happened in Sichuan every day. Not only this, they also spontaneously collected donations to distribute them to the epicenter on time. Meanwhile, in the charge of the government, many supplies, soldiers and doctors were orderly sent to earthquake areas. Soon after the shock our Prime Minister, Hu Jintao, flied to visit hard hit earthquake regions and encouraged all the people there, which moved all the nation. Even the media abroad thought highly of our efficiency and reaction to the tragedy.
In addition, some problems such as jerry-built projects emerged during this disaster, which remained to be solved.

firefly - 2008-6-20 22:07:00

明天6级考试
今天受将赴战场的同学所托
写了这篇东东
交差后顺便上传到这里
呵呵大家多批批

海外逸士 - 2008-6-21 6:17:00

The eartrhquake, having happened ..., was a great .....

hurt hurt hurt, no hurted.

losses

about everything that happened......

jurry-built?

that's not your style to make so many mistakes this time.

白沙 - 2008-6-21 8:44:00

今年中考我就猜要考地震的，果然考了。

卧龙先生 - 2008-6-21 14:30:00

问好兄弟
几天没来了

firefly - 2008-6-22 0:07:00

引用:

原帖由 海外逸士 于 2008-6-21 6:17:00 发表
The eartrhquake, having happened ..., was a great .....

hurt hurt hurt, no hurted.

losses

about everything that happened......

jurry-built?

that's not your style to make so many ......

Sorry, Sir, I shouldn't be irresponsible for scratching off such an article
Jrry-built here means 偷工减料的， if it is not the most usage, how to put it then?

firefly - 2008-6-22 0:13:00

问好白沙和龙龙

firefly - 2008-6-22 0:28:00

引用:

原帖由 海外逸士 于 2008-6-21 6:17:00 发表
The eartrhquake, having happened ..., was a great .....

hurt hurt hurt, no hurted.

losses

about everything that happened......

jurry-built?

that's not your style to make so many ......

Soon after uploading this essay
I realized some ridiculous mistakes I'd made
But I was not available to correct them then
Fortunately they were found by Mr. Oversea later
Somehow, now I take the criticism attracted by Mr. Oversea
As an implicative compliment. hehe

海外逸士 - 2008-6-23 0:52:00

you mean jerry-built, not jurry-built.

周道模 - 2008-7-7 8:15:00

learned,thanks!

童天鉴日 - 2008-7-9 9:55:00

6级没考这个哈，他们猜错了

firefly - 2008-7-9 10:29:00

要是考了要是海外老师判卷那我就死定了

海外逸士 - 2008-7-10 5:41:00

如果一個語法錯誤扣2分﹐一個拼錯扣一分。你的分數還是很高的。

firefly - 2008-7-10 14:25:00

it is rare and honored to be praised by you, sir, and after so many mistakes i made, i got it, aha

车邻 - 2008-7-15 8:30:00

哦，呵呵，俺只能流羡慕的泪！