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白沙---写在右手指有伤的日子(中翻英)

白沙---写在右手指有伤的日子(中翻英)

Written In Days With Wound On My Right Finger



One



In other words

Scissors need tossing aside.
Toward the west slope, to meet the sunrise.

Home, remember to reversely screw the key and toothpaste lid. 

Learn from a rat to gnaw anything when ripping the packet,

If this is enough to argue------



It’s far from enough

To stroke the world with eyes.



Two

My left hand’s trembling, but how I hurry to declare to Vinci,

I would successfully

Draw two imperfect circle similarly.

To see flaw of this world, a pair of leaves is enough



Three

Three of the ten fingers,

They slightly crook, may pick up a tempting cherry.

Or lessen one of them, may

Withdraw a thorn pricked in flesh

Now they droop with wound. Like a painful poet

Who undertakes overmuch crime and punishment. Division of labor for ten fingers

Approximates the fingerprint on counterfeit money, which is awfully doubtful.



Four

A micro-groove record, it revolutes slowly

What does it divulge: daylight, wheel of life, or recessive track?

If I have enough sight

I wish I could see:

An empty cuff in the wind, which with a vanished hand

Is trying to push away the fragrance of flower, music, and air.



写在右手指有伤的日子

1

就是说
剪刀要扔到一边去。
朝西坡,去迎接太阳升起。
回家,记得往反方向拧钥匙和牙膏盖。
撕包装袋的时候学学老鼠,什么都动嘴咬。
如果这还不足以证明------

对世界的抚摩
用眼睛是远远不够的。

2

左手在颤抖,但我多么急于向达芬奇宣布,
我就要成功地
画出两个同样不完美的圆。
要看出这个世界的破绽,一对树叶就可以。

3

十个指头中的三个,
它们微曲,可以拈起一粒樱桃。
或者再减一个,可以
拔出一根嵌进肉里的刺
现在它们带着伤, 耷拉着。像苦难的诗人
承担了过多的罪罚。让十指的分工
近似于伪币上的水纹,很值得怀疑。

4
一张密纹唱片,它缓慢的旋转
还泄露了什么:天光、轮回或逆行的车辙?
如果我有足够的视力
但愿我能看见:
风中的一只空袖筒,正努力用一只
消失的手,推开花香,乐音和空气。
浮世梦半生 醉醒已千秋

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回复:白沙---写在右手指有伤的日子(中翻英)

beautiful poem and trans
您真誠的,童天鑒日
http://ttjr.bokee.com/

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回复:白沙---写在右手指有伤的日子(中翻英)

多谢 firefly 先生!

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回复:白沙---写在右手指有伤的日子(中翻英)

问好
学习

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回复: 白沙---写在右手指有伤的日子(中翻英)

问好大家
希望大家坦然指正
小弟的点滴进步都离不开你们的扶持
浮世梦半生 醉醒已千秋

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回复:白沙---写在右手指有伤的日子(中翻英)

对世界的抚摩
用眼睛是远远不够的。
---------------------------------应该不仅仅是“抚摩”,还有“感知”的意思

It's far from enough
To stroke the world with eyes.
-------------------------------------------maybe  "apperceive"  is much better than "stroke",I see.or maybe I make a mistake.
您真誠的,童天鑒日
http://ttjr.bokee.com/

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回复: 白沙---写在右手指有伤的日子(中翻英)



引用:
原帖由 童天鉴日 于 2008-4-16 13:580 发表
对世界的抚摩
用眼睛是远远不够的。
---------------------------------应该不仅仅是“抚摩”,还有“感知”的意思

It's far from enough
To stroke the world with eyes.
-------------------------------------------maybe  "apperceive&q


谢谢童天的建议
我回去考虑考虑
浮世梦半生 醉醒已千秋

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