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钓月 于 2008-4-14 23:43
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译得可以,明天再学习!
我翻译完时发现了杨宗泽先生也同样译过这首诗
现在转载过来供大家参考学习
我是翻译完了才看的 果然出入很大
不过 说句实话（悄悄地）
我偷用了两句 在此说明一下
Her pureness,
meaning and
lusterIn country to stand forever
by（beside） my mother
[Beijing] Qi Ren
Hotan Jade
When traveling in the Pamirs
I found a piece of ordinary Hotan jade
Which looked like my mother’s eyes
Her pureness, latent quality and luster
Reminded me of my remote hometown
And my mother’s worries to me
Under the sky of my hometown
This life, I am unable to turn into a tree
Standing by my mother in my hometown
When walking out of Gobi and the desert in Xinjiang
I gave my mother this jade bracelet as a present
Such a simple jade, like a flower blooming in my mother’s palm
Seeming like a voiceless verse
Later, my mother put this jade bracelet
Around a girl’s wrist
Its luster, reflecting my mother’s smiling face
Flashing before my eyes
Today the girl who wore this jade bracelet
Has become my bride
What’s the profound meaning of bride?
—— Bride means wife
Who always stays with you
And gives you motherly love as your mother did
(tr. Yang Zongze )
[About the Author] Qi Ren: a famous contemporary Chinese poet, was born in Rongxian County, Sichuan Province in1965；graduated from Sichuan Teachers University. Since1985，he began to publish his poems in newspapers and magazines, in 1998 he was enrolled as member of Chinese Writers Association，he now holds an office of executive vice secretary-general of Chinese Poetry Society, adviser to Research Society of Chinese-Japanese Poetry Contrast of Beijing University .His poetry has won several kinds of state prizes. His major poetry publications are: The Gate of Fate, Fresh Flowers and Grave and The Scenery in Palm.
[北京] 祁 人
和田玉
当我穿越帕米尔高原
看见一只普通的和田玉
是那么地像母亲的眼睛
她的纯粹、内蕴和温润
令我怀想起遥远的故乡
想起故乡的天空下
那一丝母亲的牵挂
今生，我无法变成一棵树
在故乡永远站立在母亲身旁
当我走出南疆的戈壁与沙漠
为母亲献上这一只玉镯
朴素的玉石，如无言的诗句
就绽开在母亲的手心
如今，母亲将玉镯
戴在一个女孩的手腕
温润的玉镯辉映着母亲的笑颜
一圈圈地开放在我的眼前
戴玉镯的女孩
成了我的新娘
为什么叫作新娘？
新娘啊，是母亲将全部的爱
变做妻子的模样
从此陪伴在我的身旁
转载自
http://blog.voc.com.cn/sp1/qiren/103602454074.shtml
