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A Letter of Hope to Seasons

A Letter of Hope to Seasons

The exciting spring has gone
Sweat of painstaking effort has irrigated the promising soil
The hot and humid summer is really unendurable
I’m looking forward to the heaven-shaking thunder bring some cool

Must every harvest wait to be taken in autumn?
Grasp every chance and opportunity that may occur
No stop nor relax in a march
A sad and empty winter is not for you and me
Our effort will create a miracle
I do believe

附中文原作(注:中、英文版本皆为鄙人原创作品)
心寄四季

令人激动的春天
已经过去
心血和汗水
浸润了
充满希望的土地
闷热漫长的夏天
着实难熬
等待着,
那一个惊动天地的霹雳
难道每一种丰收都要等到秋季?
抓住时机
不懈进取
不要再去品尝
一个无花无果,凄凉哀叹的冬季
坚信
我们的努力
定能创造
一个奇迹
最后编辑张马沙 最后编辑于 2008-06-02 04:01:42
路漫漫其修远兮,吾将上下而求索

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回复:A Letter of Hope to Seasons

学习一下
冬箫的博客:
http://blog.sina.com.cn/zjdongxiao

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回复:A Letter of Hope to Seasons

is not for you and me?

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回复 3F 周道模 的帖子

实在不明白您的回复要表达的意思是什么!
路漫漫其修远兮,吾将上下而求索

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回复:A Letter of Hope to Seasons

and 是否应该改一下?

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回复:A Letter of Hope to Seasons

互相学习

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回复:A Letter of Hope to Seasons

seasons hoped in heart
  tr. firefly

exciting spring is gone

sweat & effort've watered the promising soil

long & muggy summer is difficult to endure

i'm awaiting a lightning bolt

must each reaping need waiting till fall?

grasp any chance

go on being aggressive

no longer suffer the fruitless and bitter winter

we believe

our try, surely

will make a miracle
最后编辑firefly 最后编辑于 2008-06-06 22:09:14
Fight for freedom, my firefly!

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回复:A Letter of Hope to Seasons

Our endeavor
will definitely be able
to create a miracle

最后编辑安城 最后编辑于 2008-06-07 13:51:36
安城博客:www.ancheng.org
电子邮箱:rex@rliu.net

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回复:A Letter of Hope to Seasons

提給樓主修改哈:)

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回复:A Letter of Hope to Seasons

我的版本只供参考 没别的意思
楼主最好在音律和简练上酌情改之
问好!
Fight for freedom, my firefly!

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回复 7F firefly 的帖子

不怕不识货,就怕货比货。两相比较,高下立现。先生的英文诗词功力,是鄙人难以企及的,只有虚心学习,学习,再学习……
路漫漫其修远兮,吾将上下而求索

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