本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 05:43 编辑
作者:谷壳子
译者:谷壳子
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1.在途
他喜欢
静默,眺望
他喜欢
麦田,旧衣裳
他喜欢
马齿苋,暗蓝色
他喜欢
跟随我,如梦想
如荒原上的
星光
On the way
He enjoys
Being quiet, overlooking
He enjoys
The wheat field,old clothes
He enjoys
The purslane, faint-blue color
He enjoys
Following after me, like a dream
Like the starlight
On the savannas
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2. 情人
——致 杜拉斯
于是
她此生都不离开这辽阔的平原
这水腥味的稻田
小圆帽的她
桑丝香的皮肤
金色的光泽
是河
星辰般耀目
这河
载着西贡岸边的
渡桥
等黄昏中最后一声汽笛
等他在絮飞的岸边
返身
归来
The lover
——To Duras
Consequently
She’ll never leave the vast plains all her life
The paddy field with flavor of water
The she with the round hat
The skin with smell of mulberry silk
The golden sheen
Is a river
Dazzling like stars
The river
Shipping by the riverbanks of Saigon
The bridge
Waiting for the final siren at dusk
Waiting for him at the bank with awhirl catkins
To turn around
To come back
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3.雏菊
你口中残留,青杏
的气息
像迟来的雨季
广场。日光下
回旋的注视,苍白太久
怕惊扰她
午后的
浅醉
雨下来了,这
缠绵
激越的
次重音
她决定展开花蕊
喧嚣地
绽放一次
Marguerite
The smell of green apricot, lingering
In your mouth
Like the overdue monsoon
Square. In the sunshine
The dizzying staring, has been pale for too long
Being afraid of disturbing her
Slight drunkenness
In mid afternoon
The rain is spattering down, the
Sentimental
Passionate
Secondary stress
She decides to unfold the stamens
To bloom
Passionately
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4. 米
她一生都在
与四季周旋
她滚烫,蕴含
日光的浆汁
她高傲,谦卑, 矜持
拒绝雨神,于千里之外
的探视
那些收割的手掌
生出烈焰,要剥取
一粒米的贞洁
她隐忍
她含泪
她说
别
Rice
She confronts the seasons
Her whole life
She is scalding hot, containing
The juice of the sun
She is proud, humble, and self-sufficient
Refusing the visiting from Poseidon
Thousands of miles away
Those harvesting hands
Burning with fire, is to strip
Her the chastity of a rice
She tolerates
She controls tears
She says
Don’t
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参考无心剑和木樨黄谷二位的译本和建议,作者谷壳子对《在途》进行了修订:
在途
他喜欢
静默,眺望
他喜欢
麦田,旧衣裳
他喜欢
马齿苋,暗蓝色
他喜欢
跟随我,如梦想
如荒原上的
星光
On the way
He enjoys
Being quiet, overlooking
He enjoys
Wheat fields,old clothing
He enjoys
Purslanes, faint-blue color
He enjoys
Following after me, like a dream
Like the starlight over the savannas
Shining
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