《望庐山五老峰》- 李白

自娱自乐 · 发表于 2009-7-14 13:54:00

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望庐山五老峰

作者：李白

庐山东南五老峰，

青天削出金芙蓉。

九江秀色可揽结，

吾将此地巢云松。

Behold the Five-Oldies-Peak of Mount Lushan

The southeastern peak of the Mt.Lushan called the Five Oldies,

It is a golden lotus cut and carved by God in the blue sky.

Where the grandeur of the Jiujiang River one can come by,

So I will tarry to live with cloud and pine tree as my buddies.

童天鉴日 · 发表于 2009-7-14 22:40:00

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云松是指云和松，还是云间的松，还是叫做云松的松？我去查查...

自娱自乐 · 发表于 2009-7-15 19:48:00

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谢谢金沙君的鼓励和奖励! :share:

自娱自乐 · 发表于 2009-7-15 20:15:00

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Jin, I am always wondering what we must do to meet your expectation in regard to poetry translation.
I reckon we should continue on with our biweekly translation forum or clinic or workshop no matter how informal it has been so far as I believe it will be greatly beneficial to all of us.

嘉木子 · 发表于 2009-7-15 20:52:00

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来赏诗和学习，更来看望自娱:rose

周道模 · 发表于 2009-7-15 21:23:00

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学习，谢谢！

青衫来客 · 发表于 2009-7-15 23:14:00

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I will look into your translation and discuss it with you if I have time tomorrow.

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