【汉英双语】青山依旧云依旧

云天2010

青山依旧云依旧
云天
早春的溪流, 无忧亦无愁
卷走三月的桃红, 和几朵绚丽的云朵
捧着知更鸟婉转的鸣唱
跳过青苔的石, 一去不回头
沿着缀满三叶草的小路
我逆流而上, 企图找寻岁月的花瓣
流水哗哗, 穿过我空空的手
落英满径, 无言亦无语
流年似水, 似水流年
再回首, 青山依旧, 白云依旧
Time Goes By
A vernal creek flows by, without any sorrow in its ripples
Taking along with it some fallen peach blossoms, and a few patches of splendid clouds
Carrying the robins’ fluttering songs in its hands
And jumping over mossy stones, down it goes, without ever turning back
Along a path adorned with clovers
I walk up the stream, hoping to find some petals from long ago
While the running creek gurgles through my empty hands
And the fading flowers fall on the path, without a word
Time goes by like a river; a river runs through time
Looking back, nothing stays the same but the azure mountains and the floating clouds

rlee

除第一节外，总体感觉平淡了一些，特别是第三节。

周道模

鼓励双语诗！好句子在一二节，“流年似水”是熟语，一般写诗用个性化语言，避开熟语。

云天2010

谢二位.
心境平平, 言语自是白开水.   :-)
翻别人大作时, 逐字逐句.
自写自译, 是想体会下区别.  :-)

rlee

好一个心境平平！