【汉英新诗】深秋我碰醒一片梨花——请指教

周道模

       深秋我碰醒一片梨花
        I Wakened These Pear Flowers by Meeting Deep Autumn
        恋着不走的小阳春啊
        气走了天地的风凉
        我和深秋在田野漫步
        碰出梨花捂胸的惊慌
        The loving small Spring hasn't gone
        Made the cold of wind go away by insulting
        I am walking in the field with deep Autumn
        Run in the panic of pear flowers covering their chests
        树上是飞鸟划落的白云
        地下是草虫叫碎的月光
        梨树也激情冲动
        又和秋天铺开婚床
        Over the trees are the clouds cracked by the flying birds
        On the ground is the moonlight broken by the insects' singing
        The pear trees are also impulse passion
        Again spread the marriage bed with Autumn
        白天梨花补白云
        月夜梨花缝月光
        The pear flowers are darning white clouds during the day
        The pear flowers are darning the moonlight at the night
        惊慌的梨花啊
        白了我恍惚的情思
        The panicky pear flowers
        Whitening my absentminded feeling and thinking
        纵情的梨花啊
        芬芳着前途的悲凉
        The indulge pear flowers
        Making their desolate future fragrant
       
                                      2005年深秋
                                      2011-6-19译

童天鉴日

梨花四月中旬左右开
汗中

周道模

开放的时代花乱开啊！谢读！问好！