【英诗旧作】A Wonderful Beetle——Shi Xiaoqun

江志剑 · 发表于 2012-2-17 11:34:01

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A Wonderful Beetle——Shi Xiaoqun
by Zhijian Jiang
Beetles,beetles beautiful movie star,
Shi Xiaoqun is the emperor's lover of Ir star,
Beetles,beetles beautiful movie star,
How I wonder who you are.
Up above the world so high,
Like an empress in the star,
Beetles,beetles beautiful movie star,
How I wonder who you are.
Beetles,beetles beautiful movie star,
Shi Xiaoqun is the emperor's lover of Ir star,
Beetles,beetles beautiful movie star,
How I wonder who you are.
Up above the world so high,
Like an empress in the star,
Beetles,beetles beautiful movie star,
How I wonder who you are.
When the world loses love and tolerance,
When I no more love you,
When you no more love me,
Then you know what will happen!
Beetles,beetles beautiful movie star,
How I wonder who you are.
Beetles,beetles beautiful movie star,
Shi Xiaoqun is the emperor's lover of Ir star,
Beetles,beetles beautiful movie star,
How I wonder who you are.
(July 26,2007)

江志剑 · 发表于 2012-2-17 11:34:36

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不谈论个人，只谈论英文，请大家批评

江志剑 · 发表于 2012-2-17 11:39:30

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为啥叫BEETLE，背后有故事的，这里就不细说

Rhapsodia · 发表于 2012-2-17 13:32:26

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题目里是有一个甲壳虫，到了诗里，一下子成了一群？

Rhapsodia · 发表于 2012-2-17 13:34:32

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Twinkle, twinkle, little star
How I wonder what you are
...
最好避开这种老幼皆知的语句。即使意思一样，也要写出新意来。您说呢？

江志剑 · 发表于 2012-2-17 13:56:20

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Twinkle, twinkle, little star
How I wonder what you are
...
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这是2007年写作的，那是我写的第一首，其实是娱乐性的童谣。
后来开始学着写作中文现代诗歌，一直写不好。
现在开始学习英文诗歌，所以翻出来看看

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