【原创英诗】我们活着、爱着、并死去We live we love we die

peter7805 · 发表于 2012-5-8 09:52:48

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我们活着、爱着、并死去
We live we love we die

The world is full of atmosphere
And we all still stand here
From the spring to the fall
Seeing the wind blow and the rain drops
We live we love we die

Let we love each other
From the heaven to the hell
And there is no killing any more
In the garden bloom flowers
On the table breakfast smells
Happily we laugh and talk
We live we love we die

Someday we all pass away
As the people in the past
If we can’t do anything great
We are still lucky not to do any harm
The stars are still shinning in the sky
And it is the moment we know about life
If we have given out our light
We are glad we used to be bright
Oh ,we live we love we die!

宛城卧龙 · 发表于 2012-5-8 11:08:22

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欣赏原创英诗

周道模 · 发表于 2012-5-9 16:39:40

本帖最后由雨荷风于 2015-10-7 17:09 编辑

Someday we all pass away
= All of us will pass away someday?

木樨黄谷 · 发表于 2012-5-13 12:12:12

本帖最后由雨荷风于 2015-10-7 17:09 编辑

Seeing the wind blow and the rain drops

如果blow和drops都是名词，此句无错误。
如果see sth do或doing，最后一词改drop，可以和fall形成假韵

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