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A Poem for Fun (49)

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发表于 2015-5-10 21:02:08 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
This wise ass,
Of course not crass,
Could play the bass,
That's made of brass.
He learned in a class.

Thro a window of glass,
He saw a pretty lass
Walking on the grass,
But he let her pass,
Following her to the mass.
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发表于 2015-5-25 21:17:40 | 显示全部楼层
It seems to be a story of love affair. I feel an artistic beauty. It's not easy to get the music uniformity of all the ends of the lines. However, you're successful in this aspect. How excellent you are ! Congratulations .
I love all your poems both in English and in Chinese .
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