［汉译英］姜丰《始终不悔相随》

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Moon and Wind
By Jiang Feng
Translated by Pu Bida

Separated while you were alive
All ended the moment you died
Over the heavenly misfortunes
I did not regret nor I cried
Just like wind and moon
You and I are naturally tied

Scars over scars
sighs after sighs
My heart is broken into pieces
And turned into butterflies
Wish you, my lord
see their dances in paradise

始终不悔相随
姜丰

生离始，死别终，
苍天弄人犹不悔，
明月清风自相随。
伤叠伤，痛加痛，
我心片片化蝶去，
唯愿君享九霄乐。

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原诗技术层面一般，译诗更好

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木樨黄谷 发表于 2015-12-14 19:56
原诗技术层面一般，译诗更好

感谢两位主持人赏识。大概姜丰太悲痛了，不能静下心来遣词造句。有人说，一部文学作品能不能得诺贝尔奖，关键在翻译，所以同志们，任重道远啊。