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千古奇緣

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发表于 2018-8-1 22:05:04 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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千古奇緣

浩淼西湖暮靄朦朧瀲灩清波飄畫舫,風雨舟締善緣,俊男淑女意尤濃,紅樓交頸春無限
長生聖殿芬芳馥鬱氤氳瑞霧繞金宮,陰陽夢棲桐樹,佳麗明君情未了,蟾闕開懷翼永翩
興金浪鶴隨帆舞情懷淡淡岫升海煙共浴三聲贊,該地海煙共浴玩,蜜蜜甜甜償夙願
照銀瓶人戀花香思語綿綿雲伴日月同輝一片天,何時日月同輝映,卿卿我我憶當年

注:第一二句錢永德作,第三句塞外雪影作,第四句羅志海作。

Curious Fate Of Thousands Of Ancient Times

In the vast West Lakethe evening mist is dim
the clear waves ripple a gaily-painted pleasure-boat floats
in the same storm-tossed boat become attached to
moods of handsome boys and fair maidens still thick
in the Red Tower fondle each other, the spring is infinite

In the temple of life strong fragrance
The auspicious fog is dense around the Golden Palace
yin and yang in the same dream inhabit in the sycamore
beautiful ladies and king’s love unfinished
in the moon pleasure wings dance lightly forever

In the sea surge the golden waves
cranes dance with the sails
feelings light in the mountain smoke rises
sea and smoke bathe together with three praises
in that land sea and smoke bathe and play together
sweet as honey have got our wishes

Sun shines the Silver Pot Mountain
people infatuation of flower fragrance
the missing words continuous clouds accompany moon
sun and moon shine together in a same sky
what time will sun and moon shine together
lovers will talk about those years

Note: first and second sentences by Qian Yongde.
Third sentence by Saiwaixueying.
Fourth sentences byLuo Zhihai.

6/3/2018對聯體 三十六絕 羅志海譯
Couplet Poem Thirty-six Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
6100首對聯體詩
The 6,100thCouplet Poem

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 楼主| 发表于 2018-8-1 22:19:42 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 词韵绵绵 于 2018-8-1 22:40 编辑

日照銀瓶是罗志海曾用过的一个网名

广东省海丰县有一座银瓶山
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-8-1 22:27:16 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 词韵绵绵 于 2018-8-1 22:30 编辑

一三句限願押仄韵
二四句翩年押平韵

英文没押韵
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