《靈隱寺前飛來峰下坐憩得句》bilingual

海外逸士

《靈隱寺前飛來峰下坐憩得句》
隔溪小徑繞孤峰﹐林木漸深綠漸濃。向晚山亭遊客少﹐清風送得幾聲鐘。
Got the Poem When Resting at the Flying Knoll Before Fairy-Hidden Temple
Across the creek, a footpath zigzags round the single knoll
Greener the leaves look as deeper into the forest
The visitors are less and less at the arbor toward the dusk
When cool breezes bring resounding bell after bell

自娱自乐

Across the brook, a footpath winds up to the knoll,
As I move deeper into the woods, the bushes appear greener,
Close to twilight at the pavilion the tourists are getting fewer,
And the cool breeze brings the sound in that bells roll.

自娱自乐

or I wonder if we can say "brings bell after bell of the clock"?
Does 'hillock' rhyme with'clock'?  Maybe 'eye rhyme'? :P

海外逸士

sorry, i didn't move into the woods.  the knoll is across a creek.  i just sat in the arbor and looked at it.  as my sight went deeper into the woods, the foilage looked greener and greener.
the bell was not a clock bell. it's the big bell in the temple.

自娱自乐

hehehe, yes, yishi, you have the final say on that, hehehe

周道模

read,study,learn from them.