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【中诗五怪】唐多令 .花市别黄昏 |
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发表于 2011-6-30 10:34:22
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发表于 2011-6-30 11:04:47
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版主是指“翠叶红茵”矛盾吧,原意是翠绿的叶子和红色的花朵,但既然有指代不明,我把它改成“争艳红茵”了,你看如何?谢谢你!
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