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发表于 2011-10-12 23:39:08
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身色同于夜色,黑也,鸦之特性!故难串之于鸳鸯!谢谢针友鉴读!问友秋安!
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发表于 2011-10-13 14:18:40
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发表于 2011-10-13 16:19:48
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谢任友赏读!清茶一杯!
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发表于 2011-10-20 21:30:43
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青之菊诗亦咏物之作,好过这几个矣!不可妄自菲薄!
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