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五律·清风斋七咏

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发表于 2004-9-14 12:09:00 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
一,<br>明月高楼上,清风紫竹间。留云飞鹤向,洗墨宿心还。<br>远水桃源忆,平生世外牵。长松出碧色,雨后赠新颜。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;甲申年七月二十六日<p>二:<br>江长安水月,路远有疏林。白鹤山中尽,闲琴石上吟。<br>殊俗穷志隐,何室起书音?明我长相忆,几时和靖临?<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;甲申年七月二十八日<p>三,<br>有客烟村尽,江枫问草堂。阶前竹径斜,雾里菊花黄。<br>奉笔书斋静,闻君陋室香。相随倾一梦,夜色养儿郎。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 甲申年七月二十八日<p>四,<br>菊老白云天,清风玉露篇。归村秋雨复,舞墨石琴前。<br>为志穷余日,行船渡旧年。时危鸿雁寄,少有白头怜。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;甲申年七月二十九日<p>五,<br>天寒一夜秋,雨后弄扁舟。柳下人垂钓,途中曲折幽。<br>闲来唯竹径,病去倚危楼。卷语无为意,开篇自有由。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;甲申年七月二十九日<p>六,<br>行风雨后秋,夜幕步琴楼。柳岸岚烟起,池边石镜眸。<br>书斋呈拙墨,曲意洗闲愁。落叶于霜冷,书生不复求。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;甲申年七月二十九日<p>七,<br>人影阶前寂,秋来我自吟: &nbsp;花黄凝厚色,日落有余音。<br>月白如霜雪,风清隐石林。悠悠唯一梦,古韵入箫琴。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;甲申年七月二十九日<p>
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发表于 2004-9-14 13:13:00 | 显示全部楼层
好诗,握手诗友,欢迎常来!
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发表于 2004-9-14 21:02:00 | 显示全部楼层
这一组情景舒情不错。重。
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-9-15 17:03:00 | 显示全部楼层
谢两位兄长,请拿砖哦:))
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发表于 2004-9-19 13:42:00 | 显示全部楼层
欢迎斋主.精了
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发表于 2004-9-19 13:50:00 | 显示全部楼层
世外之音:)学习
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发表于 2004-9-21 10:49:00 | 显示全部楼层
好功力!深深拜读了!呵呵~~
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发表于 2004-9-24 13:30:00 | 显示全部楼层
诗是好诗,堆起的意境显功力,但少回味
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发表于 2004-10-7 17:59:00 | 显示全部楼层
闲居清风斋,吟诗抒情怀。<br>不问意如何,悠悠趣自来。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; ---给清风斋主<p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-10-7 19:50:00 | 显示全部楼层
下面引用由董树旺2004/10/07 05:59pm 发表的内容:<br>闲居清风斋,吟诗抒情怀。<br>不问意如何,悠悠趣自来。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; ---给清风斋主<br>
<br>谢兄长赠诗:)临屏一首赠兄:<br>竹下卧书斋,琴弹入诗怀.<br>花黄怜影瘦,明月故乡来.<br>
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