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[原创]从《死水》及《诗的格律》略谈闻一多实验新格律的得失(下)

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发表于 2007-1-24 11:23:00 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p class="MsoBodyTextIndent" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 0cm; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">从《死水》及《诗的格律》略谈</span></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 黑体;"><p></p></span></b></font></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 70.25pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 5.0; mso-char-indent-size: 14.05pt;"><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font size="3">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 闻一多实验新格律的得失(下)</font></span></b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"> </span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">然而闻一多毕竟是学贯中西的闻一多,以其深厚广博的融通古今中外的文学积淀和素养,在经过一段创作实践和理论研究之后,他终于冲破和摆脱了</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">20</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">年代流行的单纯限字说的束缚、桎梏和影响,不仅破天荒地提出了音尺的概念和种类,把着眼点由“字”转移到“音尺”上来,在组织诗行形成节奏的时候,一方面限定音尺数量,另一方面又同时兼顾不同音尺的有机配合,不仅总结归纳出了新诗体,而且又找到了一种能够适用于其他诗体的音节方式——这就是音尺说。</span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">他这样举例(实际这是两行四步十言诗)说道:</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 63pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 6.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">孩子们|惊望着|他的|脸色<br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">他也|惊望着|炭火的|红光</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">这里每行都可以分成4个音尺,每行有两个“三字尺”(三个字构成的音尺之简称,以后仿此)和两个“二字尺”,音尺排列的顺序是不规则的,但是每行必须还它两个“三字尺”</font></span><span style="mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman"><br/><font size="3">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</font></font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">和两个“二字尺”的总数。这样写来,音节一定铿锵,同时字数也就整齐了。所以整齐的字句是调和的音节必然产生出来的现象。绝对的调和音节,字句必定整齐。(但是反过来讲,字数整齐了,音节不一定就会调和,那是因为只有字数的整齐,没有顾到音尺的整齐……)</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">&nbsp;&nbsp;<font size="3">&nbsp; ——这段话实在中肯,可谓精辟之至!闻一多所说的“音节方式”,一方面是确定了音尺是组织诗行并形成节奏的基本单位的地位,另一方面是通过实践所形成的全面使用音尺(在构建诗行时不仅要限定音步数量,而且要同时兼顾几种长短音步的有机配合)的理念。这也就是他的音尺说理应包括的尚未明确阐述出来的内容,这也正是后来提出的现代的完全限步说的理论核心。对比来看,这对</font></span><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">20</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">年代的单纯限字说来讲,是个冲击,也是个纠正,终于找到了一个正确的途径;而对古代诗歌的传统限字说的实质(原始机械的完全限步)而言,却是个血脉和渊源的继承,只有这样才能将古典诗歌与新诗衔接起来,只有这样才能有效地促进新诗的诗体建设与繁荣、振兴。由此可见,闻一多对新诗格律的认识,已经跃上了基本格律思想的高度,为现代的完全限步说的产生和成熟奠定了坚实的基础。</span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 12.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">三</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">所谓完全限步说,是指以音步(不是“字”)为着眼点,在限定音步数量的同时又兼顾几种音步的有机配合,从而构成步数与字数的统一,音节与字句的和谐,节奏与造型的协调,以便最大程度体现内容的精神,进而求得内容与形式的完美统一。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">现代的完全限步说在新格律诗中的地位,犹如传统限字说在旧格律诗中一样,是支配所有基本格律因素形成各种格律形式的核心和脊骨。</font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyTextIndent2" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">这种理论不仅适用于前面提到的四步九言诗,也同样适用于其他所有整齐体和参差体新格律诗。除了前面举过的《死水》、《夜歌》之外,此集里的《也许》全诗4节</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">16</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">行,也是四步九言诗。但是此诗的诗行构成方式却有两种,除了</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">14</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">行与《死水》《夜歌》一样,都是《死水》式诗行之外,还有2行是用1个两音音步、2个三音音步和1个单音音步构成的:</span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">  </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">蛙|不要号,</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">‖</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">蝙蝠|不要飞  (首节尾行) </span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">  我叫|纸钱儿</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">‖</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">缓缓的|飞  </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"> </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">(尾节尾行)</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">同属四步十言诗,诗行的构成方式也并非一种,闻一多的《死水·黄昏》也是使用了两种构成方式的诗行(8行诗里,以2个两音音步和2个三音音步构成诗行者6行,以3个两音音步配合1个四音音步构成诗行者2行):</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 3.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"> </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">黄昏|是一头</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">‖</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">迟笨的|黑牛,</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 42pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">一步|一步的</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">‖</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">走下了|西<u style="text-underline: double;">山</u>;</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 42pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">不许|把城门</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">‖</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">关锁得|太早,</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 42pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">总要等|黑牛</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">‖</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">走进了|城<u style="text-underline: double;">圈</u>。</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 42pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman"><font size="3">&nbsp;</font><p><font size="3"></font></p></font></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 42pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">黄昏|是一头</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">‖神秘</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">的|黑牛,</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 42pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">不知|他是</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">‖</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">那一界的|神<u style="text-underline: double;">仙</u>——</span></font><u style="text-underline: double;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></u></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 42pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">天天|月亮</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">‖</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">要送他|到城里,</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 42pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">一早|太阳</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">‖</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">又牵上了|西<u style="text-underline: double;">山</u>。</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">——可见完全限步说的实用性、容受性是广泛的,还有还有许多新的内容有待开发。新诗时代的音步种类多,反而为诗人们开拓了更为广阔的用武之地。就诗体造型而言,无论古今,我国诗歌都大体上分为整齐体和参差体两大类,单用一种诗行构成诗节的是整齐体,兼用两种或两种以上的诗行构成诗节的,则为参差体。闻一多的《死水·你莫怨我》则属后者:</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 63pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 6.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font size="3">你莫|怨<u style="text-underline: double;">我</u></font><span lang="EN-US"><font size="3">!  </font><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 42pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font size="3">这原来|不算|什<u style="text-underline: double;">么</u>,</font><span lang="EN-US"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 42pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font size="3">人生是|萍水|相逢,</font><span lang="EN-US"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 42pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font size="3">让他|萍水样|<u style="text-underline: double;">错过</u>。</font><span lang="EN-US"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 63pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font size="3">你莫|怨<u style="text-underline: double;">我</u></font><span lang="EN-US"><font size="3">!</font><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 42pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font size="3">&nbsp;</font><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 42pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font size="3">  你莫|问<u style="text-underline: double;">我</u></font><span lang="EN-US"><font size="3">!</font><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 42pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font size="3">泪珠|在眼边|等<u style="text-underline: double;">着</u>,</font><span lang="EN-US"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 42pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font size="3">只须|你说|一句话,</font><span lang="EN-US"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 42pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font size="3">一句话|便会|碰<u style="text-underline: double;">落</u>,</font><span lang="EN-US"><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></span></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 63pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 6.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font size="3">你莫|问<u style="text-underline: double;">我</u></font><span lang="EN-US"><font size="3">!</font><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">——全诗5节,都是用同1个重唱的二步四言诗行抱着3个三步七言诗行(所用的2个两音音步与1个三音音步的排列顺序是自由的),构成这种规律的“短长长长短”式的五行参差诗节格律形式,形成一种回环往复、一咏三叹的建筑美和音乐美,生动有力地表现诗的主题,抒发了诗人缠绵悱恻的情绪。</font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyTextIndent2" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 实践证明,完全限步说是统帅和支配各种基本格律因素的核心与灵魂,是用以组成种种格律形式的纽带。这种格律思想既可以纠正单纯限字说“字数整齐步数乱”的弊端,又可以克服单纯限顿说“顿数整齐字数乱”的毛病;既可以解决新旧诗的脱节,又可以促进新诗的规范化、民族化和现代化。完全限步说的作用和意义,随着新诗的发展和成熟一定赢得人们的普遍承认和肯定。正如闻一多的《诗的格律》中所说:</font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyTextIndent2" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">“</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">我希望读者注意,新诗的音节,从前面分析的看来,确乎已经有了一种具体的方式可寻。这种音节的方式发现以后,我断言新诗不久定要走进一个新的建设时期了。无论如何,我们应该承认这在新诗的历史里是一个轩然大波</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">。”</span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"> </span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;</font></span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">1986年8月25日 <p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 12.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 齐齐哈尔铁路教育学院</span></p><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 12.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 齐齐哈尔铁路教育学院</span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 9.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">………………………………</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">注</span></b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">:<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">此文首先发表于哈尔滨铁路局齐齐哈尔教育学院<span lang="EN-US">1987年第1期院刊,1987年8月公开发表在1987年第3期《淮阴师转学报》第3期。继而1987年第11期《中国现代、当代文学研究》(中国人民大学书报资料中心)列入题目索引,1988年第1期《高等学校·文科学报文摘》列入第106页的学报文章篇目选录。</span></span>
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发表于 2007-1-24 21:04:00 | 显示全部楼层
这种<strong>新格律需要好好看看,我对这个认识不多,难以发表言论。先学习一下</strong>
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发表于 2007-1-25 13:38:00 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 04:41 编辑

在86年就写下的文章,欣赏。

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-1-26 11:24:00 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 04:41 编辑

<font face="Verdana" color="#da2549"><strong>赵福治</strong><font color="#000000">及各位版主、诗友:<br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 我在“中国诗歌博客”“诗人驿站”开了博客(cwz-21439),所发的诗歌理论文章、格律体新诗以及相关的书评、序言、后记之类,都是有关格律新诗的资料,尤其欢迎批评指正。<br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 谢谢。<br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></font>

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发表于 2007-2-3 14:54:00 | 显示全部楼层
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分析、论述的很细致,读来长知识。

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