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                        </span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #33cccc; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 黑体;">山</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #33cccc; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">
                        </span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #33cccc; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 黑体;">银</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #33cccc; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">
                        </span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #33cccc; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 黑体;">瀑</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #33cccc; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 135.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 8.47; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: #33cccc; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">●●●<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">刘荔</b></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #33cccc; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 101.65pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 8.47; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 135.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 8.47; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: green; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">从山顶上</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 135.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 8.47; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: green; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">挂下一条</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 135.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 8.47; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: green; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">银色的哈达</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 101.65pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 8.47; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 135.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 8.47; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: green; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">太阳赶来</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 135.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 8.47; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: green; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">再给你</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 135.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 8.47; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: green; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">佩上一枚胸章</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">(刘荔:女,诗人,出版诗集《大地诗旅》)</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 32pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: ?; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">连绵起伏的雪山,高耸入一片辽阔无垠的蔚蓝。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 32pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">瀑布,你这大自然壮美的杰作,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: ?; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">你这悬挂于天地间的飞扬的歌,你这奔流在绚烂诗词长河里的雄壮磅礴,竟一改“飞流直下三</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">千尺<span lang="EN-US">”</span>的訇然作响而静若处子么?竟也有了柔美的舞姿么?你从雪山上<span lang="EN-US">“</span>挂<span lang="EN-US">”</span>下,<span lang="EN-US">“</span>遥看瀑布挂雪山<span lang="EN-US">”</span>,在雪山、在蓝天、在白云的映衬下,宛若一条熠熠生辉的飞扬的哈达。哈达系在高高的雪峰上,飞扬在雪山的胸前,也飞扬在读者灵魂的天空,让读者的心清清的,呼吸也轻轻的,让生命在悄声</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: ?; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">屏气的搏击中,期待奇迹的诞生……</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 32pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: ?; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">这是多么旖旎的风光,又是多么美丽的境界呵。就在这时,奇迹诞生了:“太阳赶来</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: ?; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">/</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: ?; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">再给你</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: ?; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">/</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: ?; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">佩上一枚胸章”,一枚红红的“胸章”,一枚滚烫的“胸章”,一枚万众瞩目的“胸章”,一枚令人惊喜、令人感动的“胸章”!此刻,横亘的洁白、无边的蔚蓝与夺目的鲜红,冷色与暖色在强烈的对比中,互相映衬、互相烘托,展现出大自然无与伦比的色彩美与画意美。诗是无形画,画是有形诗。古罗马诗人贺拉斯说:“诗歌就像图画。”图画因色彩而缤纷斑斓,情趣盎然;诗因色彩而文美意丰,趣蕴其中。所以,北宋文学家、书画家苏轼提倡“诗画本一律</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: ?; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: ?; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">天工与清新”,并称赞王维:“味摩诘之诗,诗中有画;观摩诘之画,画中有诗。”《雪山银瀑》整幅画面色调明丽,意境和谐,气韵生动,富含生机,体现出诗人对大自然的深情投入。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 32pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: ?; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">值得一提的是,这首构思精巧、想象奇特的小诗,在十分有限的空间,用质朴无华、舒展自如的笔法,把大自然的景象描绘地动静交错,诗意盎然。雪山是远方矗立的静态,瀑布与雪山比是飘逸的动态、与赶来的太阳比却是相对的静态,而步履匆匆的太阳则犹如神来之笔,成为大自然这幅杰作上活力四射的动态!读者的心境,也在这种悄无声息的静态与荡气回肠的动态相互交错中跌宕起伏,陶冶心情,受到感染,迸发出对大自然的无限热爱。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 224.9pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 14.0; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;"><chsdate year="2007" month="3" day="22" islunardate="False" isrocdate="False" wst="on"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: green; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">2007-3-22</span></b></chsdate><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p>

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发表于 2007-3-22 21:19:00 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 02:29 编辑

先问好大师!待我细品!

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发表于 2007-3-23 11:41:00 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 02:29 编辑

就诗而论,个人更喜欢第一首.

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发表于 2007-3-23 21:33:00 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 02:29 编辑

<span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_gb2312;">诗是灵魂的飞翔,兄多来交流.</span>

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发表于 2007-3-24 14:22:00 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 02:30 编辑

同感,三首诗歌的意象象征意味都很浓。

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发表于 2007-3-28 16:50:00 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 02:30 编辑

<p>拜读了!<br/><br/>一切景语皆情语,好!</p>

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发表于 2007-3-28 21:49:00 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 雨荷风 于 2015-10-8 02:30 编辑

最后一首前段平淡,后面较好.但个人意见评的有点......在&lt;<strong><font color="#ff6600" size="5">雪山银瀑》中,我还真没读出<span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: green; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_gb2312;">动静交错画意浓的感觉,可能我的欣赏水平底吧,个见,问好朋友.</span></font></strong>

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