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[原创]故乡的榕树

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发表于 2007-3-22 22:36:00 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#d52b2b">故乡的榕树</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 32pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">我的故乡的村东头有一条小河</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">河岸边有一棵很大的榕树</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">听村里的老人说</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">这棵树已经有很久的历史了。树下是我童年的“根据地”。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#ee3d11">这是一棵奇特的树。古老苍蓊,枝繁叶茂。树干很大。要两个大人手拉手才围得拢。远远望去,像一把天然的绿色大伞。它以广阔的绿荫遮蔽着地面。</font>树根纵横交错,大部分露出地面。其中有一条根长约</span><chmetcnv unitname="米" sourcevalue="8" hasspace="False" negative="False" numbertype="1" tcsc="0" wst="on"></chmetcnv><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">8</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">米</span><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">,宽约</span><chmetcnv unitname="米" sourcevalue=".5" hasspace="False" negative="False" numbertype="1" tcsc="0" wst="on"></chmetcnv><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">0.5</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">米</span><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">,一直伸向小河,像一条过江龙横卧在小河上。不知是谁把这条树根牢牢地扎在河对岸的大青石板上,搭起了一座独木小桥。自从有了“桥”隔河两岸的乡亲们来来往往方便得多了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">这棵榕树的叶子绿得发黑,弯曲飘拂的长须垂在河岸上,摇曳着赏心悦目的姿态。这棵树有</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">300</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">多个节疤,节疤上的树皮特别皱,呈小窝形状,里面常常爬满数不尽的蚂蚁,树杈上有许多七零八散的鸟巢,大小不一,结构各异。<font color="#ee11ee">这里是鸟的天堂,天刚蒙蒙亮,鸟儿吱吱喳喳的叫声,吵醒了困乏的山树,吵醒了乡亲们冗长的梦。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">这棵树长年累月,虽然经受烈日暴晒,风吹雨淋,严霜的侵蚀,但并没有抖落一丝绿意,始终保持生命的神圣和庄严</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">.</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">秋风吹来的时候,树枝轻轻地晃动,抖落枯枝败叶,<font color="#f70909">像警惕的卫兵一年四季庇护着勤劳朴实的乡亲</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman"><font color="#f70909">.</font><p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">树下是一个宽阔的大草坪。绿草如茵,小时候,我常常呼朋引伴爬上树上去,捣鸟巢,拾蝉蜕,捅蜂窝,网蜻蜒,捉树虫,取蚁穴</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">””””</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">乐趣像榕树的叶子那么多。每逢月光皎洁的夜晚,这树下又是乡亲们的娱乐园。村民们用自制的竹笛,胡弦,合奏着《过冈龙》,《卷珠帘》,《磨豆腐》,《观音调》等民间小调,村姑们唱出了绕绕韧韧的客家山歌,琴声,笛声,歌声,笑声混和着小河的绿水流音,汇成一支快乐而凝重的旋律。男女老少亲热地围坐在一边,寻找着短暂的乐趣。中秋的夜晚,我们一群天真无邪的小伙伴们,欢聚在树下,津津有味地做牵羊游戏,声嘶力竭地呼喊着民谣:“山羊咩咩,四脚踢踢</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">三更半夜,去到南山,南山有老虎,北山有大蛇</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">.”</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">每逢元宵节更是热闹非常。那些小孩子骑在大人的肩膀上,尽情地观赏舞狮队在这棵榕树下参拜不停,树上挂满火红的灯笼,当时我不知道为什么要去拜这棵树,只记得大家都很兴奋。也就是在那个时候,我们拍红手掌高声而有节奏地念着“榕树叉叉,保护大家</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">.</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">拉头牛犁三丘,牵匹马走天下</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">`````<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">那快乐的叫喊声把树叶也震落下来</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">.<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><font color="#e66b1a"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">故乡的榕树,有一种看不见的生命力,那挤得满满的叶子是乡亲们团结的象征。虽然几经风雨的折磨,也曾遭受过刀斧之伤,但是依然活得那样自然,活得那样乐观</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">活得那样顽强。仍然保持生命的新绿,保持着挺拔向上的丰姿。</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#e61ae6">光阴冉冉,岁月轮回,经历无数冷风阴雨的折腾,这棵树也似乎老了许多,龟裂的躯干又结满了不少节疤,露出了深深的皱纹,但是那条长长的“桥”却一直没有弯曲。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><font color="#e61a1a"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">故乡的榕树呵</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">!</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">你是历史的见证,你是一个永恒生命的诠释,你是我经久不息的童谣</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">假若你有知觉的话</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">你是否知道我在遥远的地方</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">深深地思念和祝福着你吗</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman"><font color="#e61a1a">?</font><p><font color="#e61a1a"></font></p></font></span></p><p><font color="#e61a1a"></font></p><p><font color="#e61a1a"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><font color="#dd6d22"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">哦</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">故乡的榕树</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman"><font color="#dd6d22">!</font><p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p>
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发表于 2007-3-22 23:43:00 | 显示全部楼层
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问好前辈,欣赏大作,<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><font color="#e61a1a"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">故乡的榕树呵</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">!</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">你是历史的见证,你是一个永恒生命的诠释,你是我经久不息的童谣</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">假若你有知觉的话</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">你是否知道我在遥远的地方</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">深深地思念和祝福着你吗</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman"><font color="#e61a1a">?</font>
                                <p><font color="#e61a1a"></font></p></font></span></p><p><font color="#e61a1a"></font></p><p></p><p><font color="#e61a1a"></font></p><p><font color="#e61a1a"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><font color="#dd6d22"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">哦</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">故乡的榕树</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman"><font color="#dd6d22">!</font>
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-3-23 00:28:00 | 显示全部楼层
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谢读!问好!

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发表于 2007-3-23 11:05:00 | 显示全部楼层
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抒情议论相结合,<span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font color="#dd6d22">故乡的榕树,</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">挺有象征意义.</font></span>

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-3-23 11:35:00 | 显示全部楼层
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>木叶香禾</i>在2007-3-23 11:05:00的发言:</b><br/>抒情议论相结合,<span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font color="#dd6d22">故乡的榕树,</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">挺有象征意义.</font></span></div><p></p>谢谢您的点评!好久不见啦,妹妹呀!

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发表于 2007-3-23 13:29:00 | 显示全部楼层
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浓浓的思乡情节,大榕树是永恒的,对故乡的无限眷恋也是永恒的,儿时的梦已经过去,未来还有很长的路要走,回头看看走过的路,更加感觉应该珍惜活着的每一天:)))呵呵.看玉书兄文字,有感而发:)))[em17][em23]

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发表于 2007-3-23 16:07:00 | 显示全部楼层
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<p>通过对村头榕树的描写和对童年的回忆,,抒发作者对故乡的深深眷念.</p>

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-3-23 18:28:00 | 显示全部楼层
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>文秀</i>在2007-3-23 13:29:00的发言:</b><br/>浓浓的思乡情节,大榕树是永恒的,对故乡的无限眷恋也是永恒的,儿时的梦已经过去,未来还有很长的路要走,回头看看走过的路,更加感觉应该珍惜活着的每一天:)))呵呵.看玉书兄文字,有感而发:)))[em17][em23]</div><p></p>谢读!问好!

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-3-23 18:39:00 | 显示全部楼层
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>独品沪茗</i>在2007-3-23 16:07:00的发言:</b><br/><p>通过对村头榕树的描写和对童年的回忆,,抒发作者对故乡的深深眷念.</p></div><p></p>谢读!问好!辛苦啦!出差还惦记着散文版块!祝旅途顺利快乐!

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.5pt;"><font color="#e66b1a"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">故乡的榕树,有一种看不见的生命力,那挤得满满的叶子是乡亲们团结的象征。虽然几经风雨的折磨,也曾遭受过刀斧之伤,但是依然活得那样自然,活得那样乐观</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">活得那样顽强。仍然保持生命的新绿,保持着挺拔向上的丰姿。</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;">
                        <p><br/>我思念故乡榕树的缘由就体现在上面那段话!我想散文的其中一个重要方面,是让读者从中读出一种感受,读出一种风格,读出一种情趣,读出一种韵味!</p></span></p><p><br/>我思念故乡榕树的缘由就体现在上面那段话!我想散文的其中一个重要方面,是让读者从中读出一种感受,读出一种风格,读出一种情趣,读出一种韵味!</p>

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