《我还在寻找干净的眼睛》

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独钓寒江雪 发表于 2016-1-3 08:33
拜读精华，问好诗友！

欢迎好友，斟茶，新年快乐

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hljtangweiqun 发表于 2016-1-3 07:41
好诗，再提。

谢谢老师，上午好

鲁彦

品读精华，问好。

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鲁彦 发表于 2016-1-6 14:24
品读精华，问好。

学习诗兄临帖，问好

木樨黄谷

翻译版木樨选译：
《我还在寻找干净的眼睛》
I Am Still Looking for the Clean Eye

i am running on the roof of buildings
the road of city is too heavy, so is the pitch
i am running on the hood of car
desperately I run inhaling the exhaust, with sands sticking
to the sole and little air bubbles blinking in the sky
transparent is the field of force thoroughly
I am running in the transparent intestines

i am looking for the clean eye
which belongs not to me, or anybody
or the humanly world, or the pure water, or white, or glass
it is a pair of eyeballs
it is a shining person
it is a dull child who can fly
it runs out of my eye-socket quickly and nervously
quickly and nervously it runs out of my eye-socket

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木樨黄谷 发表于 2016-1-8 13:39
翻译版木樨选译：
《我还在寻找干净的眼睛》
I Am Still Looking for the Clean Eye

谢谢黄谷老师精彩的翻译，收藏了！
祝福新年