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[大赛] 中诗网论坛微信平台同题展《夏天的豆荚》(或《名词》)征稿 ... |
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残恒应是残垣吧!!!
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就目前看,保留12356行就行了!!
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这几行文字是名词的垒叠,诗意来自名词相互间的衍与射!在诗中,名词是意象点!!
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没有构成向心力的罗列不成I诗!个人观点!
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