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兰陵王 贝多芬第九交响曲

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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-16 23:04:02 | 显示全部楼层
寺寺 发表于 2020-4-15 10:41
附议首版点评。佳构当亮,精彩共享,问好二位。

寺版褒扬有加,于此再致谢忱。还请多多指教。顺祝春安!
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-17 14:24:37 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 何威廉 于 2020-4-17 22:16 编辑

Tune: The King of Glory

Beethoven's Ninth Symphony

By William He

Waves with tumbling.
The crests of everywhere to be blown.
Muffling folds of pall,
The billowing cloud of dark dust,
Percussive thunder from the kettle drum.
Peneus is distraught at night.
Only the brave.
Heaven's light turns to boundless hope.
A low-pitched sound,
Flavored violin trills arise,
The bassoon strikes a triumphal chord.

The doubts dissolve in the dawn.
Pierre De Ronsard Roses blossom,
In a wild harmonious maze.
Grand departed haunt the mountains sense.
The nobly Thallo of torid green,
Goes across the Rhine,
Which is the perfected temple of soul.
The Mind's Eye by Oliver Sacks.

Ode to Joy lyrics.
Norns sing notes in tune.
Youths of radiance are twirling,
Things dear and fair.  
White storks revel in such domestic bliss.
Just like the ninth marching debut,
He swings the baton once more.
Heart of Glory in the golden lays,
The concert allegro pioneers,
Where all the world will go.


兰陵王

贝多芬第九交响曲

作者:何威廉

元声起。
激水翻澜倒曳。
城头暗,
光色冥蒙,
魂蝶寻梦密阴翳。
浪花射霓旆。
英毅。
云回侧睨。
依稀处,
弦管兆端,
低郁巴松奏呈瑞。

晓天见晴霁。
正朱槿倾伫,
轻散环翠。
空明静瑟山遒媚。
渐青峰眼底,
莱茵流漾,
灵犀今古料无异。
问乐章谁最。

欢意。
诺伦会。
尽酒逸歌情,
都合高致。
栎边白鹳嘤鸣脆。
更千籁仙音,
蕴和弘丽。
徵羽交响,
竞流泻,
满浮世。


Notes:
"Peneus": Peneus was a river god in Greek mythology, and one of the three thousand children of the Titans Oceanus and Tethys. He was married to the nymph Creusa, with whom he had a son and three daughters.
"Pierre de Ronsard": A Classic Climbing Rose. A fragrant climbing rose named after a french poet, Pierre de Ronsard is also known as the Eben Rose. Over time it has become one of the best known roses in the world, and with large flowers that will continue through the season it is easy to see why.
"Thallo": Thallo was the ancient Greek goddess of spring buds and green shoots. She was numbered amongst the Horae (Seasons). Thallo was worshipped in Athens alongside the goddess Pandrosos.
"Ode to Joy": Ode to Joy is an ode written in 1785 by Friedrich Schiller. Ode to Joy is best known for its use by Ludwig van Beethoven in the final (fourth) movement of his Ninth Symphony, completed in 1824. Beethoven's text is not based entirely on Schiller's poem, and introduces a few new sections.
"The Mind’s Eye": The book,"The Mind's Eye" (2010), by Oliver Sacks,tells the stories of people who are able to navigate the world and communicate with others despite losing what many of us consider indispensable senses and abilities: the power of speech, the capacity to recognize faces, the sense of three-dimensional space, the ability to read, the sense of sight.
"Norns": The Norns in Norse mythology are female beings who rule the destiny of gods and men. They roughly correspond to other controllers of humans' destiny, such as the Fates, elsewhere in European mythology. Norn, in Germanic mythology, any of a group of supernatural beings who corresponded to the Greek Moirai; they were usually represented as three maidens who spun or wove the fate of men. Some sources name them Urd, Verdandi, and Skuld, perhaps meaning “past,” “present,” and “future.”
"Heart of Glory": Star Trek: The Next Generation (1987-1994), Heart of Glory (TV Episode) directed by Rob Bowman. Starfleet Command sends a communication to the USS Enterprise-D about a disturbance in the Neutral Zone, a battle. The Enterprise searches for answers as to why three Klingon warriors were the only survivors aboard a freighter just inside the Neutral Zone which was seemingly attacked by a Ferengi ship.
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-17 17:48:04 | 显示全部楼层
gaozi 发表于 2020-4-15 12:19
当代人写词不易,慢词更不易,必须支持。

谢诗友鼓励。周末愉快!
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发表于 2020-4-18 11:56:54 | 显示全部楼层
”更千籁仙音,蕴和弘丽。徵羽交响,竞流泻,满浮世。“
诗书音画高雅,威廉先生皆通,令人钦佩有加!
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-19 19:45:11 | 显示全部楼层
寒水烈冰 发表于 2020-4-15 20:49
复议首版精彩点评,问好二位

寒版鼓励有加,威廉诚表谢意。恭祝文祺!
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发表于 2020-4-19 23:37:50 | 显示全部楼层
晓天见晴霁。正朱槿倾伫,轻散环翠。空明静瑟山遒媚。渐青峰眼底,莱茵流漾,灵犀今古料无异。问乐章谁最。
欢意。诺伦会。尽酒逸歌情,都合高致。栎边白鹳嘤鸣脆。更千籁仙音,蕴和弘丽。徵羽交响,竞流泻,满浮世。

欣赏大作,欢乐乐章,华词雅韵,问好何老师,我近期忙,没时间上网!
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发表于 2020-4-19 23:38:12 | 显示全部楼层
晓天见晴霁。正朱槿倾伫,轻散环翠。空明静瑟山遒媚。渐青峰眼底,莱茵流漾,灵犀今古料无异。问乐章谁最。
欢意。诺伦会。尽酒逸歌情,都合高致。栎边白鹳嘤鸣脆。更千籁仙音,蕴和弘丽。徵羽交响,竞流泻,满浮世。

欣赏大作,欢乐乐章,华词雅韵,问好何老师,我近期忙,没时间上网!
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发表于 2020-4-21 09:27:34 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 燕山客 于 2020-4-21 09:31 编辑
晓翔 发表于 2020-4-11 17:05
意象丰润,疏宕明快,富于想象!情境并茂,诗乐交响!赏学佳构,问候先生,创作快乐! ...

附议翔版点评,问好二位老师!
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-24 13:18:00 | 显示全部楼层
衷心感谢英国上议院终身贵族托斯科特勋爵在英国疫情最艰难的时刻,仍念念不忘并精心点评拙词《兰陵王•贝多芬第九交响曲》英文本(以下为中文翻译件):

何先生:
...... 您的大作史诗般地再现了贝多芬的第九交响曲,这是他的最后一部交响曲,是有划时代意义的音乐作品。我认为,您的这首词既表现出第九交响曲无与伦比的力量,又抓住了其伟大高尚的灵魂。您的诗词具有神话、自然和艺术的美相交相融的神韵。殊为佳作!
最诚挚的问候!
托斯科特勋爵
2020年4月19日


托斯科特勋爵是牛津大学哲学博士,英国上议院终身贵族,英国政府前负责能源事务的国务部长,现任英国议会俄罗斯和独联体关系委员会主席。托斯科特勋爵同时也是英国著名作家。
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-24 13:45:51 | 显示全部楼层
马丁梦曲 发表于 2020-4-18 11:56
”更千籁仙音,蕴和弘丽。徵羽交响,竞流泻,满浮世。“
诗书音画高雅,威廉先生皆通,令人钦佩有加! ...

承蒙谬赞。学问之山,知识之海,威廉尚感学识浅薄,不敢懈怠。遥颂文祺!
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