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[小诗] 母亲节:给苦难一生的母亲! |
发表于 2023-5-15 08:18:51
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谢谢永笑老师的肯定,拙作瑕疵不少!
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发表于 2023-5-15 22:53:09
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船公老师的意思是,竹月老师那可不是一二班的,是三班的!
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