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[原创] 衣 帽 鞋 袜

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发表于 2006-4-7 12:10:00 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
[watermark]<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 衣<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 衣裳对人有真情,伴我朱颜老一生。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 炎热招凉防汗出,严寒送暖保温存。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 权威席上忧污染,贫贱家庭爱补丁。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 只有农村二杆子,喜新弃旧装斯文。<p> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 一生从未说分离,献出爱情胜夫妻。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 毋论贤愚相眷恋,若逢艰苦更支持。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 豪华赢得人称美,褴褛招来众笑嗤。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 可叹世风多冷眼,文才不重重斯文!<p> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 帽<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 古来太极圈儿大,今日博士帽子高。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 护顶有心云出岫,盘头无发鸟归巢。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 长城投帜名尤在,沧浪濯缨事已消。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 眼看宫花何处插,人间只许饮箪瓢。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 鞋<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 赤脚生长在今天,定是前生结善缘。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 不少名牌随使用,更多新履供盘桓。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 高跟舞月轻如羽,胶底乘风软似棉。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 莫道身衰无用处,须知扶我上云端。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 袜<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 品种新开费剪裁,价廉物美满长街。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 千条丝织心中锦,五色花生足下苔。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 惟有华光辉两胫,再无寒气透双鞋。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 每逢佳节人前度,不亚凌波送巧来。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 毛巾<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 毛巾能洗面上斑,洗面容易洗心难。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 面上灰尘明匿迹,心中污垢暗藏奸。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 镜光照影非真相,电子描容是假颜。<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 何物功专消意蒂,不生风雨助波澜?<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;<br> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;[/watermark]
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发表于 2006-4-7 17:13:00 | 显示全部楼层
[这个贴子最后由爱松在 2006/04/07 08:42pm 第 1 次编辑]<br><br>好久不见,先问好先生!<p>精华:以生活小用品直喻人生,诗歌自然流畅,语言幽默深刻,内容饱含哲思!特别是先生一直以来认真作诗的精神,更是值得大家好好学习!
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发表于 2006-4-7 17:24:00 | 显示全部楼层
好诗,受教!不少句子可圈可点,深含哲理。
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发表于 2006-4-7 19:17:00 | 显示全部楼层
有日子不见,问老人好!<p>深含哲理的好诗!
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发表于 2006-4-7 20:35:00 | 显示全部楼层
学习了,问好先生!
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发表于 2006-4-7 21:22:00 | 显示全部楼层
&nbsp; &nbsp; 关注民生无掩饰,知非老人有童心!
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发表于 2006-4-7 21:33:00 | 显示全部楼层
第一首不是落韵么?好像依平水依新韵都落了。
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发表于 2006-4-8 10:43:00 | 显示全部楼层
下面引用由爱松2006/04/07 05:13pm 发表的内容:<br>好久不见,先问好先生!<br>精华:以生活小用品直喻人生,诗歌自然流畅,语言幽默深刻,内容饱含哲思!特别是先生一直以来认真作诗的精神,更是值得大家好好学习!<br>
<p>老师好.由我责编的&lt;澳洲彩虹鹦&gt;6期已经编入您的&lt;追远赋&gt;,我已代为留址,大概半月内能够收到样刊,请查收.<br>由于我近日离京回广州了,目前有许多琐事需办,且家里的宽带还没有安装好,不能经常上网,辛苦老师及诸位同仁了.借此向大家问好!<br>
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-4-8 13:20:00 | 显示全部楼层
<br> &nbsp; 深谢上各位楼主评阅!因近在病中,久未来坛,望批评!<p> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;问好各位!
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发表于 2006-4-8 18:55:00 | 显示全部楼层
拜读诗作,顺祝身体健康!
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