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祝贺!<br/>我写的那篇,修改稿在这里:<br/><br/><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 84pt; mso-char-indent-count: 7.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">寻找最初的雷声<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 102pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.5;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">―――谷风诗歌印象<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">在</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">北欧神话中有一个由神族和巨人执掌并对峙的世界,这个世界充满着对抗和斗争,也充满着包容,山巨人、火巨人、冰巨人的威胁无处不在,一切掩藏在深浓绿意之中。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">当黄昏日暮,那场被称为</span><span class="tpccontent"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">“</span></span><span class="tpccontent"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">诸神之黄昏<span lang="EN-US">”</span>的</span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">战争终于爆发了。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">人类的超越死生之径也同样―――经由死亡而获得永生,肉体毁灭而精神永存。</span><span class="tpccontent"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">21</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">世纪的今天,我们仿佛亲眼目睹了它,但不是在北欧古战场,而是在诗人谷风的内心世界。这战争不是关涉到领权与疆域,而关乎善与恶,灵与肉,真与伪。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; tab-stops: right 415.3pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">“自古齐鲁多豪侠”,谷风,这位山东籍诗人,在他的诗中呈现的情思亦然。他的诗作虽没有宏大的历史和战争场面,但处处锋芒崭露,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">篇幅精短而意蕴丰厚。读谷风的诗歌若有铿锵之声,甚至有一种英雄情怀。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">在使命感缺失的年代,这种情怀或许不能等同于“</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">力拔山兮气盖世”<span lang="EN-US">,</span>或“操吴戈兮披犀甲”,而是以笔为剑,笑傲人间风霜;</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">是</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">以诗人之神勇,身怀大义,嘻笑怒骂,嫉恶如仇。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 30pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.5; tab-stops: right 415.3pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">在卷帙浩繁的书海中,要记住一本书是不容易的。那些闪烁着思想光芒和艺术美感的文本更容易留在人们的记忆中。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">人们常说诗即生活,虽我们无法确知诗人灵魂的骚动从何而来,但有一点可以肯定:他必须</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">忍受着连绵不断的痛苦<span lang="EN-US">,</span>这种体验使内心充满波涛,使他处于永不停息的辗转和冲突之中。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">“</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">我病了 病在真里<span lang="EN-US">/</span>我的眼神被别在针芒上<span lang="EN-US">/</span>手指绑成十字架<span lang="EN-US">/</span>脚印似乎一堆堆篝火 丢了的遗忘比荒原更凄迷<span lang="EN-US">/</span>今天 我寻找那些丢了的 如同海水苦涩的意义。<span lang="EN-US">//</span>”</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">同时诗人对未来充满希望与憧憬:</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">“我要寻找一方春天那枚花蕾的绽放<span lang="EN-US">/</span>我要寻找最初的雷声劈开大地的瞬间<span lang="EN-US">/</span>我要寻找朴素的哭声 凝聚在雪朵里的晶莹<span lang="EN-US">/</span>我还会打开一粒尘埃里世界的影子<span lang="EN-US">/</span>捧起沙砾上的小小光芒<span lang="EN-US">/</span>我还会去读那翻来覆去的翅膀 流浪在海上的姿影<span lang="EN-US">/</span>去读沉淀在海底里的沉思。<span lang="EN-US">”(</span>《病中》<span lang="EN-US">)</span>。或许那种痛苦和屈辱的感觉并非来自生活体验而源于诗人易感的心,追求真与美的过程是如此壮美。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">一个沉思者走在探索真理的道路上而信念坚定<span lang="EN-US">,</span>他就会变得无所畏惧。无论前方有怎样的艰难险阻<span lang="EN-US">,</span>他都能看见光明。诗人是沉静的,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">他审视世界的姿势也是如此不同,如《一个人的生活》:“可以静静地审视太阳的姿势<span lang="EN-US">/</span>可以通过一只鸟抵达远方的想象<span lang="EN-US">/</span>可以在一棵树下读取阴影上的内涵<span lang="EN-US">/</span>还可以反复试着抓住一河的水 体验流逝。”</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">读其诗《痕》,可见其思考的颖悟:<span lang="EN-US">“</span>这么多墙啊却是一道道痕<span lang="EN-US">/</span>我们从远古搬运到现在<span lang="EN-US">/</span>把伤筑进去又痛在路上”,诗人进而探询人类求真的精神轨迹:“上天似乎忽略了此种存在<span lang="EN-US">/</span>留下太阳这么一只眼<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span>注视着什么<span lang="EN-US">/</span>而我们这群挣扎者<span lang="EN-US">/</span>在石头与泥土之间死去活来<span lang="EN-US">/</span>。<span lang="EN-US">”</span>这些诗句充满</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">独行者的忧愤和悲剧意识。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"> 虽也不乏缠绵纤柔之诗,但谷风的诗大多刚劲有力,言约意丰,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">匠心独运。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">有的情愫郁结,笔调沉郁;有的用笔恣意,灵动、性情</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">在写作中他</span><span class="highlight1"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">拒绝虚浮空洞,拒绝艰深晦涩之风<span lang="EN-US">,</span>着力写出心灵的本真。</span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">他这样表明他的诗观:诗歌走向真实,突出新意、自然。<span class="highlight1"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">安静的日子,一个诗人在齐鲁大地聆听惊雷的脚步。他击缶而歌,时而激昂,时而凄婉,时而沉重。正如</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">瓦格纳的歌剧《尼伯龙根的指环》所演绎的,冰与火的洗礼之后,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">一个崭新的天地即将诞生。我想正是基于此,谷风把他的</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">第五辑命名为《订做的春天》。那</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">最初的雷声将宣告春天的到来,它就要劈开大地,那期待的瞬间就要来临。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p>
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