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减字木兰花。贺党诞生百年。新韵。(秦观体) |
发表于 2021-4-3 16:45:45
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附议赞同寺版对“高龄”一词的异议,对于党和祖国,相对于“万岁”而言,运用“不老青春”“青春永驻”之类的近义词比较合适。
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