【the freedom】自由

嘉木子

                        /Garmo（嘉木）
1.
A man,only an realistic animal,who,full of selfishness,
And I, would rather become a butterfly in otherworldliness（in  next life);
To seek end-result of mud,in the broomy boscage,
Even if sell off my youthfulness,yet never lost of the plumage.
2.
Several times，i wanding in the everglade,and up to lost myself;
The effluvial smell have been jetting from the atramentous sullage ,
And a corpse flower  is  attractive to Countless fly and mosquitoes;
A!the men,o !the forbidden fruit was hung with cordage！
1.
人，是一只自私而现实的动物,
我情愿，来世修来一只蝴蝶;
在葱郁的丛林，找到泥土的归宿,
变卖青春，也绝不丢失翅膀。
2.
几次，我在沼泽地徘徊,直到迷失自我，
黑色的淤泥喷射恶臭的味道；
腐尸花引来无数的苍蝇、蚊子，
啊！人呀，哦！禁欲的果挂着绳索！

firefly

:share: 嘉兄弟

海外逸士

freedom
not otherworldlliness,  but  in next life.

嘉木子

问好:share:

嘉木子

谢谢海外老师，俺修改正了，学习了
另，望各位多斧正哦:share:

童天鉴日

提起来，重读有新意呐

青衫来客

Too many news words are being used in the llines, and it sometimes does not mean you are a man of knowledge. Referring to the numerous  well-known works, they arall llinguistically simple. No wants to read with a dictionary ready to consult in from time to time. However , this is a piece of fine work and Garmo should be cheered up.

嘉木子

谢谢青衫兄的意见 这个对我很有用