《小径》 (译 / 晓荷残梦 )

自娱自乐

So, now we can sort of see some difference between 'with' and 'by',can't we?

晓荷残梦

原帖由 自娱自乐 于 2009-7-20 19:41:00 发表
a path (is) covered with grass full of freedom?   

诗化了的语言，未尝不可。呵呵，咱们把自由装进小草里去！:D

晓荷残梦

原帖由 自娱自乐 于 2009-7-20 19:41:00 发表
a path (is) covered with grass full of freedom?
No, it can be interpreted as this path is full of freedom...

I prefer a path full of grass of freedom.  The grass is free to grow there

自娱自乐

原帖由 晓荷残梦 于 2009-7-20 19:54:00 发表
I prefer a path full of grass of freedom.  The grass is free to grow there  

hehehe, ok, good thinking 99, but let's think twice hard...

Can you see any difference between "grass is free to grow there' and 'grass feels free to grow there'? :P

晓荷残梦

原帖由 自娱自乐 于 2009-7-20 20:12:00 发表
[quote] 原帖由 晓荷残梦 于 2009-7-20 19:54:00 发表
I prefer a path full of grass of freedom.  The grass is free to grow there  

hehehe, ok, good thinking 99, but let's think twice har...... [/quote]

that depends on Gucheng's idea.:D :D :D

自娱自乐

不要再翻此人的‘诗’了，不然的话，都有可能成了杀人犯。:Z

青衫来客

长满了自由的草似乎并没有什么特殊的意义，表达的意思无外乎是自由自在吧？因此可以选择的词很多。carefree/footloose/at ease似乎好些。