【古诗英译】阮郎歸（元）劉敏中

海外逸士 · 发表于 2011-1-8 23:27:25

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青山不盡一重重。重重如畫中。石根流水玉玲瓏。高低處處通。
山向北，路回東。馬前三兩峰。峰頭更覺翠煙濃。煙中無數松。
Poem in Tune of Yuanlanggui
by Liu Minzhong of Yuan Dynasty
Green hills extend endless, one after one;
One after one, looking like in a picture.
The root of stalactite in flowing water, exquisite like a jade.
Water can go through it, high or low.
Mountains face north; the road turns east.
Two or three peaks before the horse.
The green smoke seems denser on top of peaks.
Countless pine trees loom in the smoke.

自娱自乐 · 发表于 2011-1-9 02:22:41

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青山不盡一重重。重重如畫中。石根流水玉玲瓏。高低處處通。
山向北，路回東。馬前三兩峰。峰頭更覺翠 ...[/quote]
Nice version, and very faithful to the original as always, thanks very much for sharing...

Countless pine trees loam in the smoke. ----should it be loamy, for loam is a noun?

海外逸士 · 发表于 2011-1-9 02:26:12

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sorry, should be "loom".

自娱自乐 · 发表于 2011-1-9 02:51:03

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Thanks, yes, I thought so too.

海外逸士 · 发表于 2011-1-9 03:50:44

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don't you sleep? you stay awake all night?

童天鉴日 · 发表于 2011-1-13 00:53:22

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学习Ing

青衫来客 · 发表于 2011-1-13 08:05:30

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Happy new to you, sir. Still sticking to the same style which I like now.

海外逸士 · 发表于 2011-1-13 08:43:28

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thank you. happy chinese new year.

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