【原创英诗】two snakes

peter7805

Two snakes
Two snakes on the grass
Wind their bodies around each other
Spit their tongues and saliva
Biting each other’s life
And the red blood exudes from under the scales
In one hole on the sand
Some children snakes will come out of the eggs
On the blowing of the summer wind
Everything loses its pain
And much farther, there is a river
Running slowly and being turbid gradually
两条蛇

草地上有两条蛇
相互缠绕着身体
吐着信子，流着唾液
用口咬噬着彼此的生命
在鳞片下面渗出鲜红的血

在沙滩上一处坑洞里
埋藏着将要破壳的小蛇
在夏风的吹拂下
一切已失去痛觉

更远处，有一条河
缓缓流动，渐渐浑浊

童天鉴日

嗯，我得考虑考虑诗人想说明神马

木樨黄谷

Not Dickinson's snake

木樨黄谷

Why not translate it

peter7805

译文已附上，请各位老师多多指教！谢谢！

木樨黄谷

需要了解作者的写作意图和写作背景。译文不错，还有韵，超出了原诗{:soso_e100:}