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【古诗英译】《相思》唐·王维 |
发表于 2012-2-28 00:38:46
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回晚枫君,原先剑君用 yearning 结尾与 spring rhyme, 我觉得 yearning 是阴韵,spring 是阳韵,提议改改,所以...
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发表于 2012-2-29 09:39:55
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几个古字用得比较帅!第二句为啥变问句了呢?
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