童天鉴日试译如下：
（繁体字版见博客）
●May You Rest In Peace
—— To Sufferers In WenChuan Earthquake
by Ai Song
You are not all my lives
Your names are strange to me
You lived in WenChuan at all times
This was the first place I have heard
At 14:28, May 12, 2008
The earth quivered suddenly
They began to lick you up
And everything around you
I am very sad about your unkind fate
And you are not one person
You are all of pains
And I only search in web sites
You and your homesteads
Over and over again
You got away from the civilized world
I could do anything for you
And I don’t know your names
But please, please the death
Regard me as one of your lives
At this painful moment
I will bless you in peace
May 13, 2008
Should be “Nor lovers and friends”
Better: all your lives
This was the place I have first heard of
Around you. delete “of”
Lose better feeling? What does that mean?
原帖由 海外逸士 于 2008-5-16 6:56:00 发表
Just correct your English:
Should be “Nor lovers and friends”
Better: all your lives
This was the place I have first heard of
Around you. delete “of”
Lose better feeling? What does that me
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