New

frontierpoet · 发表于 2008-12-31 11:27:00

本帖最后由雨荷风于 2015-10-8 03:39 编辑

New
You have to admit
No one hates new
I like new
Because I am creative
I like new
Because I am innovative
I like new
Because I am positive
I like new
Because I am confident
New offers imagination
New offers hope
New offers opportunity
New represents frontier
Trust me or not
World were created to be beautiful
Trust me or not
People were born to be nice
Trust me or not
Life are supposed to be good
Trust me or not
Future are supposed to be bright
Whoever you are
Whereever you are
Whatever you do
My fellow reader
Happy New Year

周道模 · 发表于 2008-12-31 18:10:00

本帖最后由雨荷风于 2015-10-8 03:39 编辑

New idea, new poetry! I wish the new advance of the human being
But the war will also happen, so sad!

钓月 · 发表于 2008-12-31 21:14:00

本帖最后由雨荷风于 2015-10-8 03:40 编辑

New offer imagination
New offer hope
New offer opportunity
New represents frontier
The tense should be coherent

frontierpoet · 发表于 2009-1-1 09:33:00

本帖最后由雨荷风于 2015-10-8 03:40 编辑

Fixed, thanks for the input

自娱自乐 · 发表于 2009-1-1 13:14:00

本帖最后由雨荷风于 2015-10-8 03:40 编辑

I wonder if 'new' can be used as a noun.
heheheh, well, anyhow, it does sound like 牛, for this year is the year of the ox.<img src=" alt="" />

frontierpoet · 发表于 2009-1-1 20:39:00

本帖最后由雨荷风于 2015-10-8 03:40 编辑

Being creative is most paramont importance in poetry composing, so new is being used as a noun is not a problem at all

自娱自乐 · 发表于 2009-1-2 03:56:00

本帖最后由雨荷风于 2015-10-8 03:40 编辑

原帖由 frontierpoet 于 2009-1-1 20:39:00 发表
Being creative is most paramont importance in poetry composing, so new is being used as a noun is not a problem at all

Yeah, sure, not a problem at all! :P :D

frontierpoet · 发表于 2009-1-18 00:08:00

本帖最后由雨荷风于 2015-10-8 03:40 编辑

Thanks!

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