The Highway

海外逸士

I'm driving on Highway I-95, On a long journey to south and sea. I start from the GardenState, All the way down to Florida. I seem traveling on a gossamer Of the national highway cobweb Woven by a giant spider All over the United States of America. The great artificial structure Is the world's ninth wonder. I enjoy the view of verdure On either side of the thread-- The line on the face of the Earth, The artery of the transportation. I enjoy the happy high speed, Of course at the speed limit(!). Who wants to get into trouble With the interstate police, That will spoil the traveling ecstasy, And cost extra expenses? I enjoy driving on highways For thousands of smooth miles Without hindrance of traffic lights Till reaching the goal of my life! 請注意節奏。

周道模

很好！学习来了。尾韵、节奏、高速路上的诗韵感和最后的升华！

弦意

来学习:strong: 不用词典，勉强读懂了：）

宛城卧龙

海外老师您能否吧这首诗歌i的节奏
给我大概的讲一下
我认真听听

海外逸士

這種新詩不用嚴格的METER﹐只要有點不規則的輕重音交替即可。寫好後多朗讀幾遍。
平時得要有英文朗讀基礎。也沒什麼可多講。

宛城卧龙

原帖由 海外逸士 于 2009-2-13 8:02:00 发表
這種新詩不用嚴格的METER﹐只要有點不規則的輕重音交替即可。寫好後多朗讀幾遍。
平時得要有英文朗讀基礎。也沒什麼可多講。

好的谢海外老师
我朗读几遍感觉感觉