关于五期笔会的选题

宛城卧龙

五期笔会提前启动，还是进行外译中
我选了几首英诗，听听大家意见：
第一首
Auguries of Innocence,
                       William Blake
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
第二首
Butterfly
            Michael Bullock
The first butterfly of spring
orange and purple
flits across my path
A flying flower
that changes
the colour of my day
第三首
The Blue Boat
           Kathleen Jamie
How late the daylight edges
toward the northern night
as though journeying
in a blue boat, gilded in mussel shell
with, slung from its mast, a lantern
like our old idea of the soul
大家看看诗歌选的怎么样，如果不合适，我们重新选择。如果有满意的我们从中选择一首。作为笔会内容。
有想起一首大家比较熟悉的英诗：
O my luve is like a red, red rose
That's newly sprung in June;
My love is like the melodie
That's sweetly played in tune.
As fair art thou, my bonny lass,
So deep in luve am I;
And I will luve thee still, my dear,
Till a' the seas gang dry.
Till a' the seas gang dry, my dear,
And the rocks melt wi' the sun;
I will luve thee still, my dear,
While the sands o' life shall run.
And fare thee weel, my only love!
And fare thee weel, awhile!
And I will come again, my love
Though it were ten thousand mile.

自娱自乐

第一首我们不是已经玩过了吗？如果入选的话，我没意见，呵呵呵

宛城卧龙

还有一首《水仙》鉴于诗歌过长，暂没有考虑。
以上几首英文诗歌贴于上海的地铁上。

宛城卧龙

第一首，上周我曾翻译过，也跟自娱君讨论过。
自娱君看看下面的两首 如何？
我的意思是，这几首只是一个参考，看看大家的意见
我们可以再换

宛城卧龙

O my luve is like a red, red rose
That's newly sprung in June;
My love is like the melodie
That's sweetly played in tune.
As fair art thou, my bonny lass,
So deep in luve am I;
And I will luve thee still, my dear,
Till a' the seas gang dry.
Till a' the seas gang dry, my dear,
And the rocks melt wi' the sun;
I will luve thee still, my dear,
While the sands o' life shall run.
And fare thee weel, my only love!
And fare thee weel, awhile!
And I will come again, my love
Though it were ten thousand mile.

宛城卧龙

这首大家熟悉吧！稍微有些长，要是没有意见可以考虑上面这首

自娱自乐

Till a' the seas gang dry, my dear,
And the rocks melt wi' the sun;
呵呵呵，这两句好像有点‘海枯石烂’的味道么，和呵呵

宛城卧龙

差不多就是那层意思
呵呵

宛城卧龙

请各位先生看看 红红的玫瑰 这首如何？

宛城卧龙

以上几首
为暂时的意见，请诸位先生看看，不合适我们再换