《小儿垂钓》胡应能

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《小儿垂钓》
胡令能（唐）


蓬头稚子学垂纶，
侧坐莓苔草映身。
路人借问遥招手，
怕得鱼惊不应人。


A Fishing Kid
By Hu Lingneng
Tran.Zhang Xiaoyang

A tousle-haired kid fishes on the mossy bank,
Where he sits sideways with a rod in his hand.
A passer comes near to inquire him the way,
He only waves back lest fish be scared away.

李世纯译作

大家探讨 ----------------------------------- 《小儿垂钓》 胡令能（唐） 蓬头稚子学垂纶，(漏译a？) 侧坐莓苔草映身。(漏译b？) 路人借问遥招手，(漏译c ?) 怕得鱼惊不应人。(漏译d？) A Fishing Kid By Hu Lingneng Tran.Zhang Xiaoyang A tousle-haired kid fishes on the mossy bank, Where he sits sideways with a rod in his hand. A passer comes near to inquire him the way, He only waves back lest fish be scared away.

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李世纯译作 发表于 2024-9-2 16:36

谢谢老师的关注与点拨！我再想想。