《成熟》 文/杨芳侠 翻译/李向前

西安杨芳侠

成熟
文/西安 杨芳侠
恍惚间
我们熟了
熟得不能再熟了
在枝头晃悠
将是多么危险的游戏

透亮的秋天
依然美好
酒已溢满九月的杯
吐掉多余的皮壳
卸下张裂的甜蜜
让我们原路返回

该收藏的
我们已悉心收好
该播种的
我们已交付大地
让我们并排
沉入大地深处
鼾声如雷的睡眠

Maturity

Without realizing this
We have been ripe
As ripe as possible
What a dangerous game it is
To be hanging on the branch tips

The crystal clear fall
Is still so cool
And the wine is quite full of
Cups of September
Having spat out useless skins and shells
And unloaded the split honey sweet
Let’s
go back on the same way

We have carefully stored
What should be stored
We have given to the land
What should be sowed
Let’s
go down deep into the land
And fall asleep
Lying side by side
Snoring like thunders

By Li Xiangqian

宛城卧龙

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问候 翻译者 李向前 先生
望先生能来讨论交流

西安杨芳侠

问好卧龙先生，他还没来过中诗呢！

金沙文字

很有诗意！欢迎常来........................

童天鉴日

好有感觉的汉诗，好有感觉的英译！欣赏！

嘉木子

透亮的秋天
依然美好
酒已溢满九月的杯
吐掉多余的皮壳
卸下张裂的甜蜜
让我们原路返回
欣赏 向您学习:)

西安杨芳侠

谢谢,问好金沙文字!:share:

西安杨芳侠

问好嘉木子,很高兴你来读过,谢!

周道模

And the wine is quite full of cups of September。这句有问题，应是：
The cups of September are full of the wine.  或者是：
And the wine is quite filled in the cups of September.

青衫来客

英汉双佳。