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自娱自乐

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青衫来客

Laoyutou，my heartfelt appreciation for your translation of my verse. With regard to 未邀山色送青至, what do you think if I put it this way---- The hill uninvited but delivers blueness for us to see?
Our mind let loose while relishing the choicest tea,
The sight of lake so intoxicating enters the gazebo.
The hill uninvited but delivers blueness for us to see
For our tete-a-tete the egrets prick up their ears also

自娱自乐

yeah, I actually thought about that as well, however, it is a slight twist if you put it in this way.
Well, very nice too, to be honest with you.
In Chinese, 湖光 to 山色, but in your English version, it is lost.

自娱自乐

湖光醉入小凉亭 -----my draft version was 'the view of lake sneaks in to intoxicate our gazebo' :Z

青衫来客

Yes, you are right here. But the color of lea does not sound so natural, that is the only problem that makes me think of the change.
Our mind let loose while relishing the choicest tea,
The scene of lake so intoxicating enters the gazebo.
The sight of hills uninvited delivers the colour of lea,
For our tete-a-tete the egrets prick up their ears also

青衫来客

And also, what is the difference between gazibo and gazebo?

自娱自乐

lea means grass /meadow, what is the color of grass?
I am sure readers would associate it with 'green / blue', right?

自娱自乐

gazibo? hehehe, no such a word....

自娱自乐

The scene of lake so intoxicating enters the gazebo.
Yep, the scene is much better, I reckon.
Good on you, buddy!

青衫来客

I like it , for it is more symbolic.