Silent night

星辰 · 发表于 2009-9-19 12:59:00

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At the dark night
Stars shining in the sky
I'm sintting under the pagoda tree
drinking a glass of wine
You've just been a spy
Steal all the secret of mine
I want to lend an attentive ear
But you just refuse to open your eye
Who can tell me
I don't know why
I treat you as the guiding light
While I'm always out of your sight
Everyone is telling lies
They always make me cry
Who can tell me
I don't know why
So why not just leave it
I wanna fly
fly away fly high
And find another part of my life
I wanna fly
And the dreams are my wings
Smile and I'll say good-bye
我自己写的~~~寻找高手翻译~~

海外逸士 · 发表于 2009-9-19 22:58:00

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at night or in the ... night
pay attention to the usage of prepositions
in the street, on the way, in the corner, at the corner.

青衫来客 · 发表于 2009-9-20 16:18:00

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A good poem you have written, telling us the secret thoughts in your mind, mystrious feeling at heart and your philosophical understanding of images which represent the major factors set up your world. Why not translated by yourself?

星辰 · 发表于 2009-9-20 23:01:00

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怎么都发英语啊~~~

青衫来客 · 发表于 2009-9-21 12:18:00

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You wrote the poem in English and we have to use the same langguage when making comments on it.

天路客 · 发表于 2009-9-21 13:01:00

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问好星辰新朋友
既然你有能力写出这么好的英文
你也应该可以把它翻译成流畅的中文
一般来说是没有“高手”会帮你翻译这个的:)

无城浪子 · 发表于 2009-9-21 16:54:00

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This poem reads like a song，beautiful isn‘t it！

星辰 · 发表于 2009-10-1 12:20:00

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Yes ! It's just a song.

星辰 · 发表于 2009-10-1 12:22:00

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I want to fly and to find the new world !

梓煜 · 发表于 2009-10-1 19:32:00

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这是一首歌词？我怎么没听过！我想飞寻找新世界
没听过呀

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