Casual Lines Gained During A Walk By The River

青衫来客 · 发表于 2009-9-20 14:11:00

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The green mountain had been veiled by mist in the evening
A new verse failed to be sent as maple leaves not yet red
A sudden cry by one wild goose in sky stopped my dreaming
The fantasia dropped into the blue wave of river and fled
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青山已是暮烟笼
欲寄新词叶未红
雁叫一声惊梦断
遐思跌入碧波中

天路客 · 发表于 2009-9-20 17:14:00

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欣赏青衫新作
远握哈

天路客 · 发表于 2009-9-20 17:16:00

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原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-9-20 14:11:00 发表
The green mountain had been veiled by mist in the e......

send---sent？
by-----of ?

青衫来客 · 发表于 2009-9-20 17:40:00

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Yes, that is a blunder. it should be 'to be sent. ' A for by and of , both are ok and by is better, I believe. Thanks a lot.

靳乾 · 发表于 2009-9-20 20:18:00

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什么时候我的中英文才能达到这样的境界。:|

海外逸士 · 发表于 2009-9-20 23:42:00

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steeped in mists

青衫来客 · 发表于 2009-9-21 09:08:00

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I think it is wrong to use mists . On one hand mist is uncountable noun and on the other, it means prehistoric age if adding the letter s to mist.

青衫来客 · 发表于 2009-9-21 09:09:00

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Shortly if you work hard.

海外逸士 · 发表于 2009-9-22 06:01:00

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how about waters? uncountable nouns with s have a specific meaning.

青衫来客 · 发表于 2009-9-22 14:53:00

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Ok, I appreciate your cue which means a great help to me.

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