《江南逢李龟年》- 杜甫

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原帖由 天路客 于 2009-10-9 15:20:00 发表
well, it's wrong to tr 王 into king,  and i have corrected it and embellished it.
hmm, Mr amusement, could i have your revision for my version?:Z

No problem!

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did you receive my message in this website? you can find me on time by other contact way.

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I got kicked out just now.

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I hardly read any of those pm lately, for they are only notices.

Okay, I will do it now.

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原帖由 天路客 于 2009-10-9 15:26:00 发表
i was=i's?

What do you mean by that?

Do you ask me if I's is the shortened form for I was?

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Firefly, 你的韵脚是ABCB还是？

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I was (I's) reunited with you when flowers fall

the tense okay?

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你的这个 ‘high time‘ 在这儿想表示什么？

It high time to go = We must go at once.

It is high time you started = you should start at once.

high time 后面时表示虚拟

你的意思是 应该是春暖花开季节，但眼下却是万花凋零？

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At prince Qi's palace you used to call,

Many a time you sang at Cuidi's hall.

Jiangnan vista shall be now at its best,

And we will meet again as flowers fall.

.

天路客

1.I got kicked out just now.
re:me too.

2.What do you mean by that?
Do you ask me if I's is the shortened form for I was?
re: yup.

3.Firefly, 你的韵脚是ABCB还是？
想凑abab的，当时没想好，汗啊！

4.I was (I's) reunited with you when flowers fall
the tense okay?
re: 不对。我想讨教一个问题，当初只是为了凑韵脚而已 再汗，呵呵

5.你的这个 ‘high time‘ 在这儿想表示什么？
表示“正是……时候”，没有表示您所说的否定转折之意。

6.At prince Qi's palace you used to call,
Many a time you sang at Cuidi's hall.
Jiangnan vista shall be now at its best,
And we will meet again as flowers fall.
最后一句将来时好像不符合原文吧，愚见，呵呵。