【汉英微型诗】柳 叶

周道模

柳 叶
跳了一辈子集体舞
独舞一回
就飘落寒秋   枯萎……

The Leaf of Willow
Danced all its life in group
Only once danced by itself
And fell into the cold Autumn wilting

附录：
【无心剑译本】
The Willow Leaf
it has danced all its life
with other willow leaves
when it dances alone
it just falls and withers
in the chilly autumn

童天鉴日

枯萎完了是另一场轮回

无心剑

The Willow Leaf
it has danced all its life
with other willow leaves
when it dances alone
it just falls and withers
in the chilly autumn

周道模

原帖由 童天鉴日 于 2009-10-10 22:27:00 发表
枯萎完了是另一场轮回

谢读！又爬上树枝去发芽？

周道模

原帖由 无心剑 于 2009-10-10 23:46:00 发表
The Willow Leaf
it has danced all its life
with other willow leaves
when it dances alone
it just falls and withers
in the chilly autumn

君的翻译细一些、散文化一些。

童天鉴日

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