无心剑双语诗【抒怀】

无心剑

抒怀
Let Me Show My Heart
为赋新词酒一杯，
思接千载似流水。
梦与古人舞蹁跹，
此生清贫终不悔。
To compose a fresh poem I drink a cup of wine,
My thoughts go through the ages like a stream.
To lead a life in honest poverty it would be fine,
If I could dance with ancient poets in my dream.
译于2009年1月3日。

自娱自乐

原帖由 无心剑 于 2009-11-4 0:02:00 发表
抒怀
Let Me Show My Heart
为赋新词酒一杯，
思接千载似流水。
梦与古人舞蹁跹，
此生清贫终不悔。
To compose a fresh poem I drink a cup of wine,
My thoughts go through the ages like a stream.
To let the life in honest poverty I would feel fine,
If I could dance with ancient poets in my dream.

Excellent!
With regard to the third line, how about ' to live a life of honest poverty it / I would be fine'?

无心剑

谢谢自娱兄，采纳你的意见。

自娱自乐

不用谢，呵呵呵，要说谢的话，应该是我。俺在你和大伙那里真是学到了不少的东西。谢谢！
其实用抱韵也行得通的？

青衫来客

To compose a fresh poem I drink a cup of wine,
My thoughts go through the ages like a stream.
To let the life in honest poverty I would feel fine,
If I could dance with ancient poets in my dream.
A wonderful version.

金沙文字

佳作 佳译。