【汉英双语】《孤寂》 诗/无心剑

无心剑

孤寂
Loneliness

明月照空潭，
乌雀栖寒枝。
孤枕难成眠，
双鬓染雪丝。

Bright moon shines on the empty pond gently,
A dark crow perches on the cold branch silently.
Too lonely to fall asleep even deep in the night,
The hair on my both temples turns snow white.
   
译于2009年1月7日。
On an empty pond shines the moonlight,
On the chilly branch perches a dark crow.
Loneliness drowns me in sleepless night,
The hair on both temples turns into snow.

译于2009年11月27日。
【自娱自乐译本】
Upon an empty pond shines the bright moon,
A crow perches on a cold branch for a respite.
As I am feeling too lonely to fall asleep soon,
On my temples the hair's turned snow white.

自娱自乐

学习，欣赏！

自娱自乐

明月照空潭，
乌雀栖寒枝。
孤枕难成眠，
双鬓染雪丝。
Upon an empty pond shines the bright moon,
A crow perches on a cold branch for a respite.
As I am feeling too lonely to fall asleep soon,
On my temples the hair's turned snow white.
hehehe, a copycat, yet a good practice for fun...:P

无心剑

自娱兄译文音韵更和谐，胜过无心剑译文。

天路客

欣赏:)

周道模

学习大家！汉诗中没有“深夜”，英译添加了。

无心剑

呵呵，多谢周兄指出无心剑译诗添枝加叶之处。