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华兄自喻诗《酒城译痴》英译（外一首）
铁冰
酒城译痴
酒窖百里香，
城阙千年醉。
译诗费思量，
痴情终不悔。
铁冰译文：
Devoted Poem Translator in Wine Town 译文大意
Tracing the wine fragrance for one hundred miles, 沿着酒香，追逐百里之遥，
I find a town drunk for one thousand years. 我找到一座沉醉了一千年的小城，
There lives a poem translator mind-consumed, 城里住着一位绞尽脑汁的诗歌翻译家，
Too devoted to feel regret all his life. 他献身译诗，一生无悔。
（2008-8-21译）
博友张和清先生译文：
A devoted translator in Wine City 译文大意
Bodegas send savor a hundred miles, 酒香飘百里，
City towers drunken a thousand years. 城楼醉千年。
Poetry translation all grabs my mind, 译诗据我心，
Infatuation will never bear any regrets. 痴恋永无悔。
华兄自译一：
A Translation Devotee in Wine City 译文大意
Wine cellars spread bouquet a hundred miles away, 酒窖香飘百里遥，
Gate towers have been drunk for a thousand years. 城楼千年醉已久。
Poetry translation absorbs my mind night and day, 译诗昼夜萦我脑，
I will devote my regretless love to it till death nears. 痴情无悔死方休。
华兄自译二：
A Translation Devotee in Wine City 译文大意
Wine cellars spread bouquet wide, 酒窖远香沁，
Gate towers get drunk for so long. 城楼已长醉。
Poetry translation grabs me inside, 译诗俘我心，
My devotion sings a regretless song. 痴情唱不悔。
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华兄自勉诗《剑》英译
剑
幽谷十春秋，
清泉映古松。
何当剑出鞘，
寒锋横长空。
华兄自译一：
Serene valley sees ten years roll by,
Clear spring reflects ancient pines.
When shall I let my sharp sword fly?
Across the sky its cold blade shines.
华兄自译二： Ten years slip by in the serene valley;
A clear spring mirrors ancient pines.
When shall I wield my sword proudly,
With its cold blade across the skylines.
铁冰译文一： In valley deep ten years have passed away,
Where the clear fountain mirrors the pines old.
O, when my sword should I display
To the vast sky with its blade cold? （2008-4-27译）
铁冰译文二： Clear ripples play with the ancient pine's shade,
Seeing ten springs and falls in glen roll by.
When shall I pull out my sword with cold blade
As the lightning to blaze and rip the sky? （2008-6-19译）
博友“文文”译文一： Deep in the misty valley
A decade flows the cystal spring
Behold the ancient pines with
Glistening blade of sword
In the coldness of the vault
博友“文文”译文二：
Solitary vale with ten years to weather
Under ancient pines the stream flows hither.
The cold white blade of a sword stares
Into the vast heaven where the sun glares
博友“文文”译文三： Solitary valley sees a decade pass.
Ancient pines in crystal water impress.
Glistening blade in cold air unfolds,
When he unveals in pride his sword. （注：末行的 unveals 是由reveals和unveils“嫁接”而成）
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