（古诗英译） 題都城南莊 （唐）崔護

自娱自乐

去年今日此門中，人面桃花相映紅。
人面不知何處去？桃花依舊笑春風。
At this very door and on this very day of last year;
Her cheeks and peach blossoms reddened each other.
No one knows why her face doesn't again turn up here,
Albeit peach flowers still smile in spring wind hither.

无心剑

呵呵，自娱兄，俺凑热闹来啦！
题都城南庄

An Inscription in a Village South of the Capital

崔护

by Cui Hu

去年今日此门中，
人面桃花相映红。
人面不知何处去，
桃花依旧笑春风。

On this day last year you stood inside this door;
Peach flowers and pink face shone on each other.
Today your pink face cannot be found any more,
Peach flowers in spring wind still smile in glitter.
译于2008年6月20日。

自娱自乐

好，比俺的好多了，欣赏，学习!
Humdinger! Well done!

铁_冰

娱乐兄，你把“无心剑”写成“无锡娘”啦！

自娱自乐

[quote]娱乐兄，你把“无心剑”写成“无锡娘”啦！
Oops, hehhe, my bad, so sorry!

海外逸士

我又要咬文嚼字了。是否該用IN  THE  DOORWAY﹖而不是IN  THE  DOOR。

自娱自乐

【许渊冲译文】
Written in a Village South of the Capital
In this house on this day last year a pink face vied
In beauty with the pink peach blossom side by side.
I do not know today where the pink face has gone;
In vernal breeze still smile pink peach blossoms full blown.

自娱自乐

"gone" doesn't seem to rhyme with "blown" somehow...save for sharing the same "n"

自娱自乐

At this very door and on this very day of last year;
Her cheeks and peach blossoms reddened each other.
I wonder why her face isn't turning up again here,
Albeit peach flowers still smile in spring breeze hither.

自娱自乐

[quote]我又要咬文嚼字了。是否該用IN  THE  DOORWAY﹖而不是IN  THE  DOOR。
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