（古诗英译）《元日》王安石

自娱自乐 · 发表于 2010-2-14 07:15:00

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王安石的《元日》

爆竹声中一岁除，春风送暖入屠苏。
千门万户曈曈日，总把新桃换旧符。

New Year day

In the sound of firecrackers an old year is gone,
Spring wind brings us warmth as we drink wine.
Thousands of households the sun shines upon,
The new charm will always replace the old sign.

In the sound of firecrackers a new year is thus born,
Spring wind brings us the warmth as we drink wines.
Upon the thousands of households the sun shines,
New charm will always replace the one that’s worn.

（无心剑版本）

爆竹声中一岁除，
春风送暖入屠苏，
千门万户曈曈日，
总把新桃换旧符。
Firecrackers are shouting goodbye to the last year,
In warm spring breeze people drink wine with cheer.
Thousands of households greet the bright rising sun,
Replacing each couplet on the door with a new one.

赵福治 · 发表于 2010-2-14 09:34:00

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千门万户曈曈日，总把新桃换旧符。

铁_冰 · 发表于 2010-2-14 10:44:00

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I like the first version, it's very nice!

自娱自乐 · 发表于 2010-2-14 13:09:00

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[quote]I like the first version, it's very nice!
hehehe, do you? Well, that is very kind of you, hehe, it is truly a kind of compliment and encouragement I need, hehehe, so many thanks for that!
hehehe, I am just an amature who knows nothing about words and expressions, as well as syntax, hehehe, absolutely a pathetic 白丁，hahahha, I sincerely wish our number one literati in the entire English speaking plus translation world could come forward to proffer his opinions
:D

无心剑 · 发表于 2010-2-14 16:39:00

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呵呵，自娱兄，俺来啦！
元日
New Year's Day
王安石
by Wang Anshi
爆竹声中一岁除，
春风送暖入屠苏，
千门万户曈曈日，
总把新桃换旧符。
Firecrackers are shouting goodbye to the last year,
In warm spring breeze people drink wine with cheer.
Thousands of households greet the bright rising sun,
Replacing each couplet on the door with a new one.

译于2007年2月20日。

自娱自乐 · 发表于 2010-2-14 17:15:00

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Very nice indeed!
Yep, greet the bright rising sun...and your last line is more faithful to the original than my one...

铁_冰 · 发表于 2010-2-14 22:27:00

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干嘛自贬得这么厉害？
Quote
I am just an amature who knows nothing about words and expressions, as well as syntax, hehehe, absolutely a pathetic 白丁
Unquote

无心剑 · 发表于 2010-2-14 22:50:00

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自娱兄，无论你如何自贬，在无心剑眼里，你都是一个值得无心剑佩服的译诗对手。呵呵，无心剑清楚你的译诗功底。O(∩_∩)O~

自娱自乐 · 发表于 2010-2-15 07:31:00

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hehehe, forget about it, and let's move on and enjoy what we like to do, hhehehe:P

无心剑 · 发表于 2010-2-15 14:18:00

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hehe, it is just for fun, O(∩_∩)O~

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